ADV # 2 Llarson The Magnificent

llarson · Post by **llarson** » Sat Nov 24, 2012 10:56 pm

LLARSON THE MAGNIFICENT TRILOGY
1.Llarson The Magnificent
2.???
3.???

Welp I'm back at making adventures . Please tell me if it was an improvment or not so that my next adventure will look better.

REQUIREMENTS
Kooky's music pack V5.0 and up
Kooky's ambiance pack

BTW From now on I'm only going to use two music packs for each trilogy rather than 2 different music packs for each level. O and BTW The skinny room in my house wasn't a copy from "MORKLIN'S REVENGE" . It nearly was but I changed it when I realized this . I just didn't want to leave the room empty . Another thing is that in my house and the first room of my tent your being timed . HAVE FUN! (or not if it wasn't an improvement)

llarson · Post by **llarson** » Sun Nov 25, 2012 4:51 pm

Um , Can I have some comments ?

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Sun Nov 25, 2012 4:52 pm

Let me try this then I'll comment.

llarson · Post by **llarson** » Sun Nov 25, 2012 5:24 pm

Wonderman109 wrote:Let me try this then I'll comment.

O sorry , I thought I had those downloads for hours. O well.

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Sun Nov 25, 2012 6:34 pm

Sadly this adventure was worse than TTNW2, and it had the same 'sneak-up-behind-the-player' concept. I'm not impressed by the scenery or atmosphere and music choice and the puzzles aren't exceptional either. You still need a lot of work on your adventures.

I will send you a revised version of this level. I will ask you to note the differences between the original and the improved version.

I don't mean to hurt your feelings, but I think you're not trying hard enough.

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Sun Nov 25, 2012 6:49 pm

Also, you forgot to include the Glass texture in your upload. I have it, but for newer people's sakes, I'll post it here.

llarson · Post by **llarson** » Sun Dec 02, 2012 6:47 am

Actually scrap the trilogy thing. I would prefer for my adventures to be perfect before I make another one. So that's how it ends 'k ?