New adventure: Breezy Hills Quest
- Blazeknight
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New adventure: Breezy Hills Quest
This is my first custom Wonderland Adventure and it features a journey in Breezy Hills. Morklin tells you to find the Green Shard hidden in the area so as to replenish and freshen the nature. You travel in the hills, caves and town to find it finally.
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- Blazeknight
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- TheThaumaturge
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I just saw this and thought I'd give it a look. :3
This being your first adventure, I thought it was pretty good! Scenery was great, only a few flaws here and there but those are minor, and I can't expect anything perfect if it's your first adventure. Experience will help you with that.
Dialog could be a little more complex, as yotyot said, but again, those improvements come over time.
There weren't many puzzles, but again, it's natural on anyone's first adventure. Mine was pure action and no puzzles, very similar to yours, actually.
From what I can tell, you have great potential for adventure designing! I look forward to seeing more adventures from you soon.
This being your first adventure, I thought it was pretty good! Scenery was great, only a few flaws here and there but those are minor, and I can't expect anything perfect if it's your first adventure. Experience will help you with that.
Dialog could be a little more complex, as yotyot said, but again, those improvements come over time.
There weren't many puzzles, but again, it's natural on anyone's first adventure. Mine was pure action and no puzzles, very similar to yours, actually.
From what I can tell, you have great potential for adventure designing! I look forward to seeing more adventures from you soon.