New adventure: Breezy Hills Quest

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Blazeknight
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New adventure: Breezy Hills Quest

Post by Blazeknight » Tue Jan 01, 2013 5:52 am

This is my first custom Wonderland Adventure and it features a journey in Breezy Hills. Morklin tells you to find the Green Shard hidden in the area so as to replenish and freshen the nature. You travel in the hills, caves and town to find it finally.
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Post by Dark Drago » Tue Jan 01, 2013 5:59 am

First download!!!
I'll play it now!
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Post by Monofly » Tue Jan 01, 2013 8:09 am

I just got GOLD and finished it in 22 minutes. It wasn't that hard but, it's a great adventure.
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Post by Dark Drago » Wed Jan 02, 2013 7:30 am

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Post by Blazeknight » Thu Jan 03, 2013 2:46 am

Two days, two replies
What happen to others?
Me sad
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Post by Wonderman109 » Thu Jan 03, 2013 2:49 am

I'm playing it right now.

Please be patient, it can take time for people to get around to new adventures.
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Post by Wonderman109 » Thu Jan 03, 2013 3:00 am

Good adventure for your first. The scenery had a couple of rough edges and the dialogs/plot need to be longer and more complex, but good job as a firs adventure! :)
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Post by Blazeknight » Thu Jan 03, 2013 4:42 am

Thank you very much Wonderman109. I'll wait :D . My actual idea was to start a hub but on second thought, I noticed that I must make at least two or three adventures before the hub making process as that's the current trend for newcomers according to experienced members. :)
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Post by TheThaumaturge » Thu Jan 03, 2013 6:20 am

I just saw this and thought I'd give it a look. :3

This being your first adventure, I thought it was pretty good! Scenery was great, only a few flaws here and there but those are minor, and I can't expect anything perfect if it's your first adventure. Experience will help you with that. :)

Dialog could be a little more complex, as yotyot said, but again, those improvements come over time.

There weren't many puzzles, but again, it's natural on anyone's first adventure. Mine was pure action and no puzzles, very similar to yours, actually.

From what I can tell, you have great potential for adventure designing! I look forward to seeing more adventures from you soon. :)
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