3th Adventure - The Magic Cuboid - Part 1

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Sammy_P
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3th Adventure - The Magic Cuboid - Part 1

Post by Sammy_P » Sun Nov 24, 2013 12:43 am

Tennis thing with Nobody.

Let's hope this works.
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Post by Nobody » Sun Nov 24, 2013 1:04 am

Eh, it was okay, but the scenery is bad and the challenge was pretty much based entirely off of the fact that you didn't have a Spy-Eye. The plot was also kind of insubstantial, but since the same went for TMD part one, TGT part one, TGlet's-forget-this-ever-happened part one, and CoL part one, I'm completely okay with that.

TIME TO WORK ON THE SEQUEL!!! :D
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Post by MyNameIsKooky » Sun Nov 24, 2013 1:14 am

A pretty good improvement over your previous adventures. Needs a Spy-Eye though. Also, in outdoor areas, you should make the walls jagged to make them look more natural. ;)
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Post by Sammy_P » Sun Nov 24, 2013 1:23 am

MyNameIsKooky wrote:A pretty good improvement over your previous adventures. Needs a Spy-Eye though. Also, in outdoor areas, you should make the walls jagged to make them look more natural. ;)

DON'T YOU TELL ME WHAT TO DO

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Post by Jutomi » Sun Nov 24, 2013 2:07 am

I really like these adventures of yours!

But really... the evil cuboid? :lol:

Well, it's not as crazy as some of the things I've seen.
And, to be fair, I'm making a sign-planet adventure with a scritter-pole and scritters on starmagic.

But really, wow. :lol:
Your only little stinker that's absolutely NOT a z-bot by this name,
Jutomi~ :mrgreen:

Also, if you want to see my level list, here it is! :D
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Post by yot yot5 » Sun Nov 24, 2013 10:19 am

PROS:
Funny dialogue
Decent puzzles

CONS:
SCENERY. Add some trees in the walls, make the walls jagged, change the floor type here and there, etc.
A bit short

ALL IN ALL:
Pretty good for a 3rd adventure. But remember: quality over quantity!
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Post by Sammy_P » Mon Nov 25, 2013 3:12 am

Updated the level. PLAY IT AGAIN!!!!
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