Hello,
Here is my new adventure!
Any and All feedback is appreciated
~ Matt
[Adventure] The Missing Key
- HumanGamer
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[Adventure] The Missing Key
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- MyNameIsKooky
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- HumanGamer
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So, i've played both of your latest levels, and they were nice and simple, and fun! And I see that you actually improved so much! Keep it up!
Here are some tips that might help improving your levels:
Try something new!
Make something new each adventure, I noticed that you used the POP and the round and diamond buttons trick a lot in your latest levels, and this might get boring if you kept doing the same thing over and over, try something better (and more fun), such as a small puzzle that uses pop, where you need to press a button to open a gate, or just a transporter puzzle that makes you go to the other side to continue the level.
Nobody likes to wait a lot!
Try to make less of those parts where you have to stand without doing a thing, an example of this is the east part of the cave, the fire traps and bridges aren't a challnge at all, and it's just not fun to wait for it to go off(Or on).
The looks of the level.
If the level was beautiful, it'll make it even more fun to play, and this level did a pretty good job at this!
But also try to use different height of the walls, it'll make it even look much... MUCH better!
That's all I've got to say, hopefully this was helpful to you!
Goodluck!
(I apologize if there were grammar errors)
Here are some tips that might help improving your levels:
Try something new!
Make something new each adventure, I noticed that you used the POP and the round and diamond buttons trick a lot in your latest levels, and this might get boring if you kept doing the same thing over and over, try something better (and more fun), such as a small puzzle that uses pop, where you need to press a button to open a gate, or just a transporter puzzle that makes you go to the other side to continue the level.
Nobody likes to wait a lot!
Try to make less of those parts where you have to stand without doing a thing, an example of this is the east part of the cave, the fire traps and bridges aren't a challnge at all, and it's just not fun to wait for it to go off(Or on).
The looks of the level.
If the level was beautiful, it'll make it even more fun to play, and this level did a pretty good job at this!
But also try to use different height of the walls, it'll make it even look much... MUCH better!
That's all I've got to say, hopefully this was helpful to you!
Goodluck!
(I apologize if there were grammar errors)
- HumanGamer
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Thanks for the tipskidkidaaa1 wrote:So, i've played both of your latest levels, and they were nice and simple, and fun! And I see that you actually improved so much! Keep it up!
Here are some tips that might help improving your levels:
Try something new!
Make something new each adventure, I noticed that you used the POP and the round and diamond buttons trick a lot in your latest levels, and this might get boring if you kept doing the same thing over and over, try something better (and more fun), such as a small puzzle that uses pop, where you need to press a button to open a gate, or just a transporter puzzle that makes you go to the other side to continue the level.
Nobody likes to wait a lot!
Try to make less of those parts where you have to stand without doing a thing, an example of this is the east part of the cave, the fire traps and bridges aren't a challnge at all, and it's just not fun to wait for it to go off(Or on).
The looks of the level.
If the level was beautiful, it'll make it even more fun to play, and this level did a pretty good job at this!
But also try to use different height of the walls, it'll make it even look much... MUCH better!
That's all I've got to say, hopefully this was helpful to you!
Goodluck!
(I apologize if there were grammar errors)
The heights of walls part is the part I am absolutely awful in.
I tried it for my past adventure, but...
I think it looked nicer without them, honestly.
Oh, but back on topic!
I have completed your level!
Actually, I done it about one and a half times; I had to go back for half of it, because I wanted those gems.
The greed!
AAAH!
Oh, and all so, that part with the sign was kind of mean, but hilarious.
'Twas a beautiful addition!
It all so made me lose...
Time to walk away slowly.
I tried it for my past adventure, but...
I think it looked nicer without them, honestly.
Oh, but back on topic!
I have completed your level!
Actually, I done it about one and a half times; I had to go back for half of it, because I wanted those gems.
The greed!
AAAH!
Oh, and all so, that part with the sign was kind of mean, but hilarious.
'Twas a beautiful addition!
It all so made me lose...
Time to walk away slowly.
Your only little stinker that's absolutely NOT a z-bot by this name,
Jutomi~
Also, if you want to see my level list, here it is!
(Also: List of Hubs, WA Manual)
Oh, and my YT wonderland channel. Forgot about that.
Jutomi~
Also, if you want to see my level list, here it is!
(Also: List of Hubs, WA Manual)
Oh, and my YT wonderland channel. Forgot about that.
- Wonderman109
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