23rd Adventure: The Last Mistake

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23rd Adventure: The Last Mistake

Post by yot yot5 » Sun Jan 06, 2013 9:44 pm

This adventure will require My Music Pack V2 or higher and MNIK'S Music Pack V5 or higher!!!

===The Wondertown Invasion Pentalogy===
Part 1: The Wonderbank Nightmare
Part 2: Foggy Footprints
Part 3: Shadow Of The Storm
Part 4: Metalwork
Part 5: The Last Mistake

This is it. This is the end of the greatest battle of Wonderland's history. Who will be victorious? Will Yanzeex be able to steal the Doomstick Key, or will you be able to free Stinky from Yanzeex's evil enchantment?

I just noticed that my only storyline that actually has a "happy" ending is The Goutweed Cycle, and this storyline is no different. It ends on a very bittersweet note, almost as depressing as the ending of The Iceberg Trilogy. Other than that, I'm REALLY proud of the storyline in this one. The plot is very complex, and there are probably a couple of hundred loopholes, but just stick to the facts and enjoy making The Last Mistake of the war. :twisted:

I'm already working on Cavern Of Lies, Part 6 and my next major storyline will be you working on Cryonax's "project" (play the adventure to find out what I'm talking about). As always, please download all monster textures and make sure you review!!!
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Post by Wonderman109 » Mon Jan 07, 2013 12:54 am

Just wondering: That thing about you having two weeks to stop Imix from finding the Wonderstone and using it to call people of his kind to destroy Wonderland back in the Wonderstone trilogy - when will you get back to that? You ended 'Under the Snow' on a sort of cliffhanger.
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Post by Wonderman109 » Mon Jan 07, 2013 2:41 am

Wow, this was epic. I spotted a couple of glitches, but overall it was intense.
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Post by Nobody » Mon Jan 07, 2013 3:04 am

STUCK ON DOOMWAVE

Oh, and Cryonax's cage dialog is repeatable.
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Post by yot yot5 » Mon Jan 07, 2013 9:56 am

Wonderman109 wrote:Just wondering: That thing about you having two weeks to stop Imix from finding the Wonderstone and using it to call people of his kind to destroy Wonderland back in the Wonderstone trilogy - when will you get back to that? You ended 'Under the Snow' on a sort of cliffhanger.
Imix already found the Wonderstone, remember? He used it to steal the Doomstick from Stinky and co a few hundred years ago and defeated Gax with it. When he defeated Gax, he started charging the Great Rainbow Gate which could be used to call people of his kind to destroy Wonderland, or whatever. The Great Rainbow Gate would also get Imix back to his original plane, so he wouldn't have to keep sacrificing his kind at the Ritual of the PTRF. Then he returned the Doomstick to the vault in the Void so Stinky wouldn't know something was up.

Hang on: Did you even know that the scenes in the Wondercaves were FLASHBACKS??? All 3 of them told a story of something that happened a few hundred years ago! If your still confused, PM me.

@Nobody, thanks for pointing out Cryonax's dialogue. I'll fix it when I have the chance. When you're working on the Doomwave, I recommend you press the early buttons as fast a possible. The longer you hang around, the more chompers come into the arena.
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Post by Nobody » Mon Jan 07, 2013 6:52 pm

Beat the doomwave!

PLOTTIFICATION HAAHAHAHAHA
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Post by dig 222 » Mon Jan 07, 2013 7:47 pm

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Post by llarson » Mon Jan 07, 2013 10:21 pm

I'm stuck on the Pyramid-maze-race-thing.
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Post by Emerald141 » Mon Jan 07, 2013 10:28 pm

That was INTENSE. I loved the action in this adventure, and the storyline was also really cool! Can't wait to see what comes next! :D

(I got a good laugh out of the reference to my levels near the end too. Thanks for that!)
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Post by Wonderman109 » Tue Jan 08, 2013 12:15 am

yot yot5 wrote: Imix already found the Wonderstone, remember? He used it to steal the Doomstick from Stinky and co a few hundred years ago and defeated Gax with it. When he defeated Gax, he started charging the Great Rainbow Gate which could be used to call people of his kind to destroy Wonderland, or whatever. The Great Rainbow Gate would also get Imix back to his original plane, so he wouldn't have to keep sacrificing his kind at the Ritual of the PTRF. Then he returned the Doomstick to the vault in the Void so Stinky wouldn't know something was up.
Oh, that's what I meant. I was wondering when the player would try to stop Imix from finishing the Rainbow Gate, which Balrash said would happen in two weeks.
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Post by Blazeknight » Tue Jan 08, 2013 5:59 am

Wonderful, intense and epic...

Waits...next adventure
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Post by Welcome00 » Tue Jan 08, 2013 7:15 am

Finished it already. This is perhaps one of the most fun yet challenging level, congratz!
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Post by yot yot5 » Tue Jan 08, 2013 10:16 am

Wonderman109 wrote:Oh, that's what I meant. I was wondering when the player would try to stop Imix from finishing the Rainbow Gate, which Balrash said would happen in two weeks.
I doubt you'll be able to do much. Yanzeex, on the other hand... :twisted:

Thanks for all the reviews, guys!
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Post by dig 222 » Wed Jan 09, 2013 8:12 am

Is it intended that you can quickly walk between fireballs in this part?

The area where you have to press all buttons before the fireflowers shoot.
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Post by yot yot5 » Wed Jan 09, 2013 10:04 am

dig 222 wrote:Is it intended that you can quickly walk between fireballs in this part?
No, but it's so hard it doesn't really matter (I still haven't walked between the fireballs, and I've been trying for the past five minutes).
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Post by Nobody » Wed Jan 09, 2013 3:35 pm

I've succeeded several times. It really depends on if you're better at timing or efficiency I guess.
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Post by ab-47 » Fri Jan 11, 2013 6:33 am

I loved this level! this will be one of my favorite levels I ever played!

Thank you so much yotyot! hope you make more of these in the future! :D
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