TMS STORYLINE+News!!!!

JohnEmmanuel143 · Post by **JohnEmmanuel143** » Wed Apr 08, 2009 10:49 am

The midnight star storyline has been released!Check it out!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k37D6z0VCpw

It's just a 1-minute storyline!

Also,check out the annotations of it!!!

cbloopy,here is the text in wordpad!

News!!!!

The Game has been restarted from the top in a different way!

Pics for the old version anyone?????:)

I know!This is your own house..

Verano Town Central

Shopping time!

Downtown Verano!

Forest

Cavern

Last!Greystone Pass!

Leave Some Comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

richmond2010 · Post by **richmond2010** » Wed Apr 08, 2009 11:17 am

Well, the song does not come from Wonderland Online, it comes from GrandChase.

Anyway, nice storyline

JohnEmmanuel143 · Post by **JohnEmmanuel143** » Wed Apr 08, 2009 12:18 pm

cbloopy · Post by **cbloopy** » Wed Apr 08, 2009 6:32 pm

richmond2010 is referring to this annoation in your video

cbloopy · Post by **cbloopy** » Wed Apr 08, 2009 6:37 pm

Nice video. But I can't read much of the dialog text in the video. You should consider (at least for the video) using a different text color in your dialog. Something that contrasts well against the yellows of the floor tiles on the screen. And give more time for people viewing your video to read the dialog text before you click to the next interchange.

richmond2010 · Post by **richmond2010** » Thu Apr 09, 2009 7:15 am

Well, you can pause the video and read it!

cbloopy · Post by **cbloopy** » Thu Apr 09, 2009 7:35 am

richmond2010 wrote:Well, you can pause the video and read it!

It's still blurry and hard to read, heck, look at my screenshot of the video!

A video like this is supposed to help draw someone's interest in the adventure. Having to work for blurry text does not help I'm afraid.

JohnEmmanuel143 · Post by **JohnEmmanuel143** » Thu Apr 09, 2009 9:00 am

I got an Idea!I will be editing my video

JohnEmmanuel143 · Post by **JohnEmmanuel143** » Thu Apr 09, 2009 10:17 am

DP,but look up!

richmond2010 · Post by **richmond2010** » Thu Apr 09, 2009 11:37 am

I have added a small red annotation about it being on GrandChase. Sorry if it makes you mad.

cbloopy · Post by **cbloopy** » Thu Apr 09, 2009 6:47 pm

Thanks for the storyline in text, although maybe I should've left well enough alone and not read it.

The storyline sounds fun but the English could use some improvement.

I love those screenshots of your overworld though, they are richly detailed and just look so well made! If MS ever needs a designer for the hubs in the next WA game, I think they could really use someone like you!

AJQZC · Post by **AJQZC** » Fri Apr 10, 2009 2:12 am

And you too, cbloopy.

JohnEmmanuel143 · Post by **JohnEmmanuel143** » Fri Apr 10, 2009 6:11 am

richmond2010 wrote:Well, the song does not come from Wonderland Online, it comes from GrandChase.

Anyway, nice storyline

You're right!It is from Grand Chase!Gonna Edit it....

But I dunno How I got it....

All i know is that I downloaded WL and Crazy Kart.....

Must be some error...............................

cbloopy wrote:Thanks for the storyline in text, although maybe I should've left well enough alone and not read it. The storyline sounds fun but the English could use some improvement.

I love those screenshots of your overworld though, they are richly detailed and just look so well made! If MS ever needs a designer for the hubs in the next WA game, I think they could really use someone like you!

You think so too about the english thing?

Anyway,
Thanks about the screenshot....
I am looking forward making the new version for you guys!

Let's say,uhm,
Demo 1 will end in Fire Island Boat!

You'll see why!;)