Well .. I've never seen ice sewage ...
But as it is only a game!
Stinky Ice
Stinky Ice
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- Wonderman109
- Rainbow MegaStar
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Not bad for a second level, but could be better. And yes, I do wonder how sewers get frozen over so much in Wonderland...
GRADINGS
Puzzle 18/25 The puzzles were fun and hard enough, but they weren't very original. Try to spend more time on your puzzle. yot yot, (another user here,) told me once in a PM that he plans all his puzzles on paper before making them in the editor.
Action 22/25 Good job with the spikeyballs and the chomper at the end.
Storyline N/A I would recommend you start putting a storyline of some sort in your adventures. It's not the most important thing in a level, but you can only get so far with the type of levels you're making right now. Storyline adds purpose to the level and allows plot twists.
Scenery 21/25 Not bad, but this didn't look that much like a sewer.
Glitch-Free: 23/25 Was the chomper in the powder keg area supposed to kill itself?
OVERALL GRADE: 84/100 Good, but I still found some weak points.
This was better than your #1, but you should start focusing on a plot and some new puzzle ideas. Also, it's okay to make your levels longer. There are some levels here that are over 30 wlvs in size!
GRADINGS
Puzzle 18/25 The puzzles were fun and hard enough, but they weren't very original. Try to spend more time on your puzzle. yot yot, (another user here,) told me once in a PM that he plans all his puzzles on paper before making them in the editor.
Action 22/25 Good job with the spikeyballs and the chomper at the end.
Storyline N/A I would recommend you start putting a storyline of some sort in your adventures. It's not the most important thing in a level, but you can only get so far with the type of levels you're making right now. Storyline adds purpose to the level and allows plot twists.
Scenery 21/25 Not bad, but this didn't look that much like a sewer.
Glitch-Free: 23/25 Was the chomper in the powder keg area supposed to kill itself?
OVERALL GRADE: 84/100 Good, but I still found some weak points.
This was better than your #1, but you should start focusing on a plot and some new puzzle ideas. Also, it's okay to make your levels longer. There are some levels here that are over 30 wlvs in size!
- Wonderman109
- Rainbow MegaStar
- Posts: 3530
- Joined: Thu Jun 28, 2012 11:25 pm