Escape from the Void
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- Rainbow Wonderlander
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Escape from the Void
This takes place after "Find Those Gloves". Anyways, the Stinker(who I haven't named) sent you to the Void, and now you have to escape! Hope you like it.
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Not bad, I did find it pretty straight forward though. I found that last part rather interesting. From that ending, I'm assuming there's going to be a part 3?
With The Void, you didn't add a side texture for the walls, and make the walls, floors, etc. jagged and round... it looks better.
A very nice adventure and I can't wait for Part 3. Maybe you could make like a boss battle for part 3, that would be good. ~ 7/10
With The Void, you didn't add a side texture for the walls, and make the walls, floors, etc. jagged and round... it looks better.
A very nice adventure and I can't wait for Part 3. Maybe you could make like a boss battle for part 3, that would be good. ~ 7/10
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- Rainbow Wonderlander
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Thanks for our review! I'm planning on making a Part 3, so look for that in the next few days. Sorry if it's a little linear, and I'll make the walls/floors jagged and round next time. I don't quite know what you mean by "side texture" though.md wrote:Not bad, I did find it pretty straight forward though. I found that last part rather interesting. From that ending, I'm assuming there's going to be a part 3?
With The Void, you didn't add a side texture for the walls, and make the walls, floors, etc. jagged and round... it looks better.
A very nice adventure and I can't wait for Part 3. Maybe you could make like a boss battle for part 3, that would be good. ~ 7/10
As for a boss battle in Part 3, I'll see what I can do for that.
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- Rainbow Wonderlander
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I couldn't really think of a way to show where the Voids would appear and where they wouldn't, so sorry if that's a little bit inconvenient.Wonderman109 wrote:Nice job on it, but the void scenery was kind of unrealistic and the race was a little annoying, what with the voids appearing under your feet and all.