Escape from the Void

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Escape from the Void

Post by Super Nuclear Power » Sat Apr 06, 2013 8:29 pm

This takes place after "Find Those Gloves". Anyways, the Stinker(who I haven't named) sent you to the Void, and now you have to escape! Hope you like it.
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Post by md » Sun Apr 07, 2013 2:55 am

Downloading it now. I can't try it now though, I'll have a crack at it later.
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Post by md » Sun Apr 07, 2013 3:33 am

Not bad, I did find it pretty straight forward though. I found that last part rather interesting. From that ending, I'm assuming there's going to be a part 3?

With The Void, you didn't add a side texture for the walls, and make the walls, floors, etc. jagged and round... it looks better.

A very nice adventure and I can't wait for Part 3. Maybe you could make like a boss battle for part 3, that would be good. ~ 7/10
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Post by Super Nuclear Power » Sun Apr 07, 2013 3:50 am

md wrote:Not bad, I did find it pretty straight forward though. I found that last part rather interesting. From that ending, I'm assuming there's going to be a part 3?

With The Void, you didn't add a side texture for the walls, and make the walls, floors, etc. jagged and round... it looks better.

A very nice adventure and I can't wait for Part 3. Maybe you could make like a boss battle for part 3, that would be good. ~ 7/10
Thanks for our review! :) I'm planning on making a Part 3, so look for that in the next few days. Sorry if it's a little linear, and I'll make the walls/floors jagged and round next time. I don't quite know what you mean by "side texture" though. :?

As for a boss battle in Part 3, I'll see what I can do for that.
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Post by md » Sun Apr 07, 2013 3:55 am

Whoops, what I meant to say is that you didn't change the side texture of the floor to The Void (it was still the cave side texture).
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Post by Wonderman109 » Sun Apr 07, 2013 1:40 pm

Nice job on it, but the void scenery was kind of unrealistic and the race was a little annoying, what with the voids appearing under your feet and all.
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Post by Super Nuclear Power » Sun Apr 07, 2013 2:30 pm

Wonderman109 wrote:Nice job on it, but the void scenery was kind of unrealistic and the race was a little annoying, what with the voids appearing under your feet and all.
I couldn't really think of a way to show where the Voids would appear and where they wouldn't, so sorry if that's a little bit inconvenient. :oops:
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Post by md » Sun Apr 07, 2013 8:09 pm

I agree that it was a little annoying with the voids appearing out of nowhere, but I didn't really mind it.
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