Adventures of budgie boy and fish fran

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eee226
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Adventures of budgie boy and fish fran

Post by eee226 » Mon Aug 15, 2011 10:17 pm

A story by me,The idea of the story was in 2009.Ok I will stop talking.
Once there was a budgie named Bud.He would always visit his Francis.One day there were so hungry Francis said "Would you get a flower for us to eat?"Sure budgie boy said.
sometimes, kiwis have to die
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Post by eee226 » Mon Aug 15, 2011 10:25 pm

Then he was flying....... flying.......Flying.............And flying......And then he said "OH MY GOD!!!!!!!! Its a pink sparkly flower"He then takes the flower and flies off.AND FLYING.......AND FLYING.........AND FLYING........ AND FLYING...................................................Then he arrives at the house,Francis said "YOUR FINALLY HERE GOSH" "Yep" Bud said,They both look at the flower."Lets have our first bite" *Chomp*.Both said "I'm dizzy"*Both faints*
sometimes, kiwis have to die
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Post by eee226 » Sat Aug 20, 2011 8:25 pm

Is it me or is it just my story suck so bad
sometimes, kiwis have to die
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Post by Muzozavr » Sat Aug 20, 2011 11:01 pm

It's not really bad but it makes absolutely no sense at all and most people are usually not in the mood for a concentrated piece of "wait, WHAT?!"
Rest in peace, Kym. I hardly knew ya.
Rest in peace, Marinus. A bright star, you were ahead of me on my own tracks of thought. I miss you.
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