The Wonderland Board

I couldn't come up with a better title.

The only reason I'm not doing this as a level series is because it would be hard to do, considering the star is a Z-bot.

EDIT: THE SEQUEL: http://pcpuzzle.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=22506

Chapter 1: The DAS Federation

Zippy was bored. He had read every book in the house, called up all his friends through Hologram, and ordered a Z-bot's delight Pizza - A Pizza that was 18"wide and 15" long with extra wirey metallic cheese that came with a large soft drink(he had ordered grease for his) - and finished it.
He decided to call up Zany. He was always having a good time. He should have a cure.
He turned on the Hologram Calling Device(HCD) and called Zany. Moments later a hologram of Zany appeared.
"Hey, Zippy. Hurry, I'm at a meeting of the DAS Federation, and I don't want to miss it."
"Hi, Zany. Sorry to bother you. If you want to continue with the meeting, go ahead. I was just wondering if you had a cure for my boredom."
"How typical. Why don't you come over? This meeting is getting interesting."
"Sure. Thanks, Zany."
"You're welcome. See you here." The Hologram ended.

Zippy thought that DAS sounded interesting. He wondered if they served food after meetings. He hoped so. He was still hungry, despite finishing that giant Pizza fifteen minutes ago. He looked in the fridge. There were two half-eaten wads of Z-wiss Cheese, a head of Roman Wall Lettuce, and three bottles of Fuel Juice. Nothing to satisfy him.
He checked the drawer. All that was there were a few antennae to replace his if they broke, a water/steam detector he had never put up, and the Remote control that ran his 3-D HD TV that he had never bought. He sighed.
He eventually left without anything to eat. Along the way, he saw Zoony. Zoony stopped to talk to him.
"Where ya going?"
"Erm, nowhere." Replied Zippy. He didn't want to tell Zoony about the Meeting he was heading to. If he knew Zoony, he would head there and start gabbing away about all the ways it could be better. He didn't want him ruining it for him.

Later, he saw Zwikko, the salesman. As usual, Zwikko tried to sell him something.
"How about some nice-"
"Sorry, no time." said Zippy, zipping away.

He soon got to the meeting. As all of them were long, this one was only a quarter done. They talked about Stinkers, The Nuisance they were, the problem they were, and how mean, nasty they were. ZiZanZoon(the leader) said they ought to do something to get rid of them.

.....

"Nice meeting." Zippy said as he and Zany left. "But, all they talked about were Stinkers."
"Of course. That's what DAS stands for, Destroy All Stinkers."
"Ah."

From then on, Zippy was an annual member. He went to every meeting and contributed the most. But soon, although he didn't know it, he would be its destroyer.


So, How is it? It might not have a lot of humor, but it will soon(I hope).

Please Comment!

I like the idea, exept that I find Stinkers awesome and don't want them destroyed.

When's chapter 2 comming out?

Roman Wall Lettuce!

MyNameIsKooky: Yep. There are all kinds of Z-bot techno stuff mixed around with normal stuff to create their stuff.

BoyWhoFlies: NOW!

Chapter Two: The Plot Against the Stinkers

Zippy rushed through the neighborhood. The DAS Federation was supposed to have a special meeting today.
"Hel-" began Zoony.
"Bye!" Finished Zippy.
Zoony couldn't figure him out. He decided to follow him.

"New Sales-"
"See Ya!"
Zwikko watched Zippy zip by, followed by Zoony. He scratched his head with an antennae. Then he followed.

Zippy arrived just in time for the meeting to start. He took his seat and waited.
"Alright." began ZiZanZoon. "I know that these meetings usually last a long while-"
Suddenly he was Interrupted by a voice.
"Take a long time, huh? Then you'll love these nice cushions I got to rest your-"
"Um, for one thing, You are not supposed to be here, Zwikko. For a second thing, you interrupted me. For a third thing, NONE OF US ARE INTERESTED!" said ZiZanZoon fiercely.
"Well, Okay, I was just trying to make a few sales." Zwikko replied remorsefully.
"Hey, I could use a few of those pillows!" piped up a voice in the back.
Zwikko was delighted. "Now that there is an example you want to follow! Grateful enough that I was trying to help these poor Z-bot's aching backs to buy-"
"That will be enough, Zwikko. You may go, now."

But no sooner had Zwikko gone than another voice piped up.
"Hey, he was just trying to make this place more comfortable, which is something I can certainly live with. Plus, it's really cold here! And-"
"Be quiet, Zoony!" Zippy shouted at his friend. Quietness followed, and ZiZanZoon started again.
"Alright. As I was saying, Our meetings are usually very long-"
"Hey! This stuff looks more like tar than Grease Punch! What-"
"And it will continue to be, if Zoony doesn't keep quiet!"
A period of quietness followed.

"Anyway, I have decided to save your ears, backs, and such the bother and make this meeting short."

Everyone cheered.

"However, I have come up with a master plan to ultimately defeat the stinkers."
He lifted a piece of paper on an easel, reveling a photo of Stinky, Loof, Qookie, and Peegue.
"These are the stinkers' heroes. Whenever Wonderland is in danger these four stop it. All we need to do is eliminate these four, then attack. Without these heroes, they do not stand a chance!"

Everyone Applauded.

"I have figured out how to destroy them, also. First we send a Z-bot down-"
"And destroy them? Just that? Can't we do something a lot more awesome, like load a giant cannon and crush them? Or lay a Bomb on them to blow them to smithereens? Or-"

"I wasn't quite finished yet, Zoony." ZiZanZoon said sternly. "We send a Z-bot down to pretend to become friends with the stinkers. Then they lead Stinky, Loof, Qookie, and Peegue into a trap, where we destroy them!"

Everyone Applauded and Cheered at the same time.

"Okay, everyone's antennae down."
Everyone lowered their antennae.
"Okay, now, whoever would like to volunteer to be the Z-bot who will destroy the stinkers, raise an antennae.

Suddenly Zippy got an itch on the head. He couldn't scratch it with an antennae or ZiZanZoon would think he volunteered. But the itch became worse and worse he eventually scratched it with one antennae, hoping ZiZanZoon wouldn't see.

"Thank you, Zippy! You have Volunteer to wipe out the Stinkers! We all owe you thanks!"

Zippy was about to say that he didn't volunteer, when he realized what would happen if he DID go. He would be a hero. Everyone would congratulate him for wiping out that puny Stinker Race. He would go.

.....

Zippy wondered why he had ever decided to go. Here he was, his head in the ground, with a broken antennae, on a foreign planet. He sighed. Suddenly he heard someone coming. He hoped he would see him. He did.
"Oh My Goodness!" a Stinker yelled. He pulled Zippy out of the ground. He was puzzled. "What is a Z-bot doing here?"
"I um... lost my way." a dizzy Zippy lied.
"Well, good thing I found you. Come with me and I'll fix that broken antennae. My name is Loof. What's yours?"

Zippy grinned. "Zippy. Zippy the Z-bot."


Well, that was a long chapter! What do you think? Please Comment!

Zippy sounds like my fan charecter, Zapper, from WP in the last part.

That was awesome!
Poor guy, getting stuck on another planet for scratching his head...

Glad you like it! The third chapter should come sometime this week.

Yay!

LittleZbot wrote:Glad you like it! The third chapter should come sometime this week.

LIKE NOW!

Chapter 3: Loof

"Owowowowow." Zippy winced. It hurt - a lot.
"Just another minute and it will be over." Loof replied to his "ow" sayings.
He carefully wrapped some Duct Tape around the broken antennae.
"How's it feel?"
Zippy moves his antennae around. "Good as new."

Zippy looked at Loof. He wasn't at all like he had pictured him. Indeed, he was the exact opposite.

From ZiZanZoon's descriptions, he had pictured Stinkers as monstrous black creatures with hypnotizing eyes, horns, and fangs throwing innocent Z-bots into rivers. But Loof wasn't at all like that. Maybe...
Nah. What am I thinking? ZiZanZoon is always right. Maybe Loof is the only one who isn't evil.

"Hey, Zippy, are you listening?"
"Huh? Uh, yeah. What where you saying?"
"I was asking how you got here."
"Oh yeah. Well, it's kind of a blur. One moment I'm in my home, eating Pizza, the next I'm in a hole on a foreign Planet."Why do I have to keep lying?

Loof shrugged. "Well, anyway, would you like to meet my friends after Lunch?"
"Erm, no thanks." said Zippy, remembering his vision of stinkers.
"Don't worry. It's perfectly safe. They're all pretty much like... me, I guess."
"How did you know what I was thinking?"
Loof grinned. "I understand why you Z-bots would be afraid or angry at us, considering it seems as we have destroyed your kind before."
Zippy wasn't very surprised about that. However, Loof wasn't done.

"However, you might be surprised to learn that we actually did not."
"You didn't?!"
"Nope. It was always water, lava, or fire that killed you. You just blame us because we happen to set up the place so you guys run into them. It's not our fault you take the paths."

Zippy considered this. It did seem possible, but of course, Loof could be lying. But either way, he had to learn to get the Stinkers' trust.

"Alright. I'll go."


That chapter seems kinda short. Comment more Please!

Now he realy sounds like Zapper.

That was great! -gets ready for Chapter 4-

boywhoflies wrote:Now he realy sounds like Zapper.

That was great! -gets ready for Chapter 4-

*Sits next to Boywhoflies and gives him some of my popcorn*
LET THE WAITING BEGIN!
*Waiting music plays*

*waiting music is destroyed because I am hungry and there wasn't enough popcorn so I ate it*

I'm gonna do that Tomorrow. Or the Next day.

CHAPTER 4 UP!
Note: Pay attention to this chapter because it contains some characters that will be in some later levels of mine.

Chapter 4: Wondertown

Zippy had just entered Wondertown and was amazed at what he saw.
There were stinkers everywhere! A merchant, some wee stinkers playing chase(all had green beanies or helicopter hats except for one, which had a red Beanie), and a bunch of other random Stinkers. There were even some putting on a show!

First of all, Loof introduced him to Stinky. He was kind of afraid that Stinky might be:
1. More Vicious than Loof
2. Suspicious.

But Stinky turned out to be just as friendly as Loof.

Then, He introduced him to Ned.
"Hi, Loof. Got any food? I'm starving!" Ned greeted them.
"No, Ned. Sorry. I came by to introduce you to Zippy. He's gonna stay with us for a while."
"That's nice. I'm still hungry, though." He looked at Zippy. "You look like a bagel."
"No, I'm not!" replied Zippy, steamed.
"Sorry, Zippy. As you can tell, Ned is, uh, usually hungry. We better go. Bye, Ned."
"Bye, Loof. Bye, Bagel."
Zippy sighed.

Next came Quitto.
"Hello, Loof. Looks like you could use a nice, soft-"
"I didn't come here to buy, Quitto. I came to introduce you to Zippy the Z-bot."
"A Z-bot? He looks like he could use a nice, little back massager. Look at how hard his back is! It's only-"
"My back is NATURALLY this way, thank you." Every planet has its own Zwikko.
"Well, okay, maybe you could use these pillows-"
"Goodbye, Quitto."
"Goodbye, Loof. You can also buy them together as a deluxe set! Only 67 coins-"
Loof and Zippy hurried off.

Then there was Wiener. He stopped in the middle of a game of chase(he was the red-capped one) to talk to Loof.
"Hi, Wiener."
"Hi, Loof. Who's this blue guy?"
"I'm Zippy. Zippy the Z-bot."
"A Z-bot? Here? Cool. Why is he here? Are you on another adventure?"
"No. He got lost, and-"
"You're beginning an awesome quest to to find the legendary Chocolate Chest of Doom to find a mysterious way to open it to find out if what's inside stuff that's made of hot dogs to see if it can help find the home of his that got-"
"NO! We're not on-"
"Oh boy! Can I come with you and if it's no help can I EAT it?!! Oh boy-"
"WE ARE NOT ON ANY ADVENTURES!!!"
"Geez, alright, you don't have to yell. Well, I just missed about fifteen minutes of Catch, so now I gotta go find out who's 'it'."

Loof then introduced him to Custom, the shape-shifting Stinker.
"Hi, Loof. Come for a change of shape?"
"No, not this time, Custom. I came to introduce you to Zippy."
"Pleased to meet ya, Zippy. No wonder you came to me. Stinkers aren't supposed to be blue, the size of a wee stinker, or have sticks pointing out of them."
"I am not a Stinker. I am a Z-bot!"
"Oh, I'm so sorry. Would you like a change anyway? It's free."
"No thanks."
"Well, come by anytime you do."

Then along came Achoo.
"Hi, Achoo."
"Gesundheit."
"No, his name is Achoo."
"What? You sneezed right as you said his name."
"No, that IS his name."
"Someone who has a sneeze for a name. Figures."
"H-h-i, L-l-l-oof. Who is th-th-that bl-bl-blue stink-k-ker?"
"He's nothing to be scared of. He's Zippy, a Z-bot."
"A ZBOT!!! RUN FOR COVER!!" He dived behind Loof.
"Don't worry. I'm Harmless."
"You are? OK." Achoo came out, forgetting about all his fear.
Stinkers will believe anything. Zippy thought.

"Heylo."
"Hello, Newt. This is Zippy."
"Hiyou, Zippy teh Zlee-Boot"
Figures "Hi, Newt. Erm, should we go now, Loof?"
Loof considered. "Well, we don't have much to say, so ya. Se you, Newt."
"Slee ha."

"Hi, Topple, this is-"
"No need. I saw you introduce him to everyone else. Hi Zippy. Hope you have a nice time here."
"Hi, Topple. I might. It depends on whether or not everyone will be the same next time."
Topple laughed. "Everyone makes mistakes. They'll recognize you. No worries!"
Loof looked up at the sky. "It's almost supper time! We Better get back. Bye, Topple!"
"Bye, Loof. Bye, Zippy!"

Zippy looked back as they headed to Loof's house. Everyone is pretty nice here. I'm actually thinking I might like it here.


Whew. That was the longest chapter yet! Funny? Good? Leave more comments please!

I have an idea!
How about you include Diffrent types of Z-Bots!
(That appear later as the story progresses)
As example.
The red Z-Bot
Appearance is
Blue Metal-Skin is replaced by Red
Green eye replaced by Yellow
Yellow antennae dot replaced by Green
Dark Blue pattern replaced by Dark Red



The Flame-Bot
Still thinking of a use. But maybe this?
If theres ever a twist in the story where Zippy decides not to go along with the plan and they take a signal for the trap to begin they could use this Z-Bot Type.
Useage: Probably a Z-Bot to be used in the trap to eliminate the stinkers
Appearance
Metal skin is now black
Metal Pattern removed and replaced by Blue flames painted over the body
Antennaes are removed and blue flame emitters are put on the antennae parts
Eye is now pure red. No pupils.
Speed is super fast. Faster then a Z-bot and more smart.
Can't be destroyed by fire or lava.
Weakness: Water
Powers: Can Zip over Lava,Water and Sewage!
Way to get it in the water: Make Flame-Bot hit a wall over water to destroy him! But it takes 5 drenches!
Probably the best Type to include if there was to be a epic battle put in.



The Z-Bot Super-Battery
The battery the Z-bots use to Power up the Negative-Bot and make Flame-Bot. This can also make a normal Z-Bot into the Red Z-Bot for a limited time only.
Only reccomended if theres a battle



The Negative-Bot
The Negative-Bot is Flame-Bot's Power down form. Battle included only.
This Z-Bot is the only Z-Bot that is the Master of Negative Energy.
Not that special unless you consider being able to make you drunk Special.
Walking up makes you walk down going left makes you go right.etc

Sorry, but other Z-bot types probably won't be in it. However, I can use them for a possible sequel.

-reads chapter-

That was awesome! Lol, Achoo...Custom was awesome too.

-pulls out a chair and 2 boxes of popcorn, and passes one to Lexie in return for earlier-

boywhoflies wrote:-reads chapter-

That was awesome! Lol, Achoo...Custom was awesome too.

Yeah. Achoo is scared of anything until he gets to know it. Even Gems and Coins.

Custom- Yeah, he was a good idea. He's based off the abilty to make your own custom character in WA and WA:MOFI

I'll make Chapter 5 Tomorrow. At the rate I'm going, I should be finished with the Fanfiction by the end of the week.

Why tomarrow?
You've got the entire day to make another!
Oh and thanks BWF *Eats some popcorn*
*Waiting music remix plays*

LexieTheFox wrote:Why tomarrow?
You've got the entire day to make another!
Oh and thanks BWF *Eats some popcorn*
*Waiting music remix plays*

Hmm... Good Point.

Slightly Possibly today.

Wiener and Achoo remind me of Skip and Jump.

I know. Since you canceled that I decided to recycle their characteristics.

Is that alright with you?

I guess. It's not as if they're copyrighted or anything.

Good job. Can;t wait till chapter 5.

When's it coming out?

Probably...

NOW!

Chapter 5: And so on...

Many days had passed. Zippy was now a usual in Wonderland. He had become accustomed to it. But now that he was used to it, Zippy didn't know how he would be able to destroy-not to mention betray-it.

His Hologram phone beeped. He quickly went to his room in Loof's house and answered.
"Hello?"
"Ah, Zippy. Haven't heard from you in a while. How is it going?"
"Fine, ZiZanZoon. All of them are in my grasp."
ZiZanZoon smiled evilly. "Perfect. Lead them to Stinky's Cove in the section with many large rocks. Find The rocks shaped like a Surfing Z-bot, and lead them there. We will be waiting."
"Surfing...Z-bot?"
"Yes. It may seem strange, but that is where we will be. Bring them there at exactly 3:00 PM tomorrow."
"Alright." Zippy replied, hesitating.

After ZiZanZoon got off, Zippy called Zany.
"Hello?"
"Hi, Zany."
"Zippy! Where ya been, pal? How come you haven't called me?"
"Look, Zany, I'm in trouble. You know how I have to bring the Stinkers' heroes to be destroyed, right?"
"Ya."
"Well, I don't think I can do it."
"Why Not? You sick or something?"
"No, I-I-I-I-"
"Spit it out."
"Zany, I think I actually like them."
"WHAT???!!! How on earth could you like those four-eyed, fire-breathing, green-skinned creatures? I'm surprised you evn lasted this long!"
"No, Zany. They aren't like we think."
"Huh?"
*sigh*"You wouldn't understand unless you've met them. They're actually nice."
After thinking a moment, Zany replied "Well, if you really don't think you can, then don't. Do what YOU think is right."

A while later, Loof called out "Zippy! Come and get it!"
Zippy came down. He had decided what to do. He wouldn't like it, but he was Z-bot and must remain loyal to them.
"Erm, Loof?"
"What?"
"Would you mind coming with me tomorrow somewhere? And maybe you could Round up Stinky, Qookie, and Peegue to come too?"
"Sure. Why?"
"There's a... um... surprise there."
"Well, alright. I'll get us to come."
Zippy felt sick doing it, but if he didn't he would betray everything he stood for. He had too.

.......

"Hi, everyone." Zippy said to the gang the next morning.
"Hello, Zippy. I hear you wanna take us somewhere?" Stinky replied.
"Well, erm, yes. Sort of."
"Then lead the way! We'll be right behind ya!"

Sickened to his stomach, Zippy led them.


The Next chapter will probably be the last. Any Comments? If any are on your mind, post away!

DONT DO IT ZIPPY! DO WHAT IS RIGHT!

I have to go to bed. The rest of the week I'm not allowed on Computers so this will be finished Monday.

Turns out I have a little time today. I'll quickly finish this up.

Chapter 6: The Rebel

Zippy looked behind him at the stinkers. They were swapping jokes, laughing, running, and more. He didn't want to betray them. He liked them too much.

He looked up and saw the rock that looked like a surfing Z-bot.
"You guys stop here. I'll go in alone."
He went in and looked around. Sure enough, a Z-bot ship was right above him. A hologram appeared in front of him. ZiZanZoon was there, along with a few other Z-bots, including Zany.
"Ah, Zippy. You have brought the stinkers with you, I assume?"
Zippy nodded.
"Where are they?"
Zippy pointed to outside the rock with one antennae.
"Good. Bring them in."

Zippy closed his eyes tight. He thought about it. He didn't want to betray the Stinkers. But that would mean rebelling against the Z-bots...
"Well, Zippy?"
Zippy opened his eyes. He made his decision.
"No."
"Excuse me?"
"No. I'm not gonna bring them in."
"And why not, may I ask?"
"Because I don't want some silly Z-bot ruling my life. I gotta do what I think is right."
Zany flashed him a quick smile.
"But...but... that means you're a traitor!"
"So? I'd be a traitor anyways. Just to the Stinkers, not the Z-bots. If I have to have a choice, I choose to be with the Stinkers."
"Why, you little rebel! I'll fix you!"

He shot a ray of electricity at Zippy. Thankfully, Zippy was nothing short of his name and zipped out of the way. A few more rays were shot and avoided in the same way.
Then Zippy surprised everyone and zipped up a large rock onto the ship. he found a door and went in.
He zipped over to the control panel and opened a small section full of wires.
Oh great. Which wire will disactivate this ship? He decided to shoot them all.
Zap! Zap! Zap! Zap! Zap! all the wires were broken.

"Self Destruct in sixty seconds."
Oh well. That will do. Zippy thought.
ZiZanZoon heard and immediately shouted "Everyone! To the escape pods!"
That brought a crazy crowd of Z-bots headed toward the pods. Zippy was almost crushed by them.

By the time the smoke cleared there was only one one-man pod left.
"Self Destruct in thirty seconds."
He rushed to it and was about to press the launch button when he noticed a lone Z-bot lying on the ground, both antennae broken. He had obviously been crushed by the crowd.
He looked him over. It was Zany! He looked at the pod, then at Zany. He wasn't sure what to do.
"Self-Destruct in ten seconds."
Without thinking another thought about it, Zippy threw Zany into the pod and ejected it.

"5...4...3...2...1..."

............

Loof paced. "What could've happened? Zippy hasn't returned in fifteen minutes!"
"Don't worry, Loof, Zippy's all right." Qookie assured him(and herself).
"I hope so." Loof was really nervous. Suddenly an explosion was heard.
"That does it. I'm going in."
"Well, if you're in, I'm in." Stinky said.
"Me too."
"Me too."

They entered the rocky place Zippy had gone into. There were pieces of metal everywhere.
"Okay, everyone, start looking."
Everyone ran about looking for Zippy. It was quite a bit before he was found.
"Hey, Loof! Over her!" Stinky yelled. Everyone raced there immediately.
There was Zippy, broken into several parts. Each one smashed by all the metal that had fallen on it.



Don't worry, It has a happy ending. I'll post the Epilogue soon. PLEASE GIVE MORE COMMENTS.

Poor Zippy...
It was still awesome, though.

*Gets ready for the Epilogue*

Epilogue

Everything was back to normal. The wee Stinkers had managed to repair Zippy(When asked how one replied "I don't know. I guess it's one of those things that only we understand because you grown-ups are too worried about boring things like jobs.") and Zany had managed to contact Zippy. He had landed on the Planet of the Z-bots and repaired. He said someday he wanted to come and visit, along with Zwikko and Zoony(Zippy groaned about that part). All in all, things ended out pretty well, although No-one knew what was in store...



All right, that ends my Fanfiction. Like it? THEN LEAVE MORE COMMENTS!!!

Nice, but short.

No-one knew what was in store...I hope that means a sequel.

The whole thing was made of metal fount on Mt. Awesome.