The Wonderland Board

Inspired by LittleZBot's fan fiction so i'm doing one.
Main Characters
Sonic The Hedgehog (Main Main Character)
Tails the fox
Lexie the fox (Expected i presume)
Eggman
Metal Sonic
Amy
Knuckles The Echidna

Chapter1 "Mushroom Crisis"
One fine day in Mushroom Valley Sonic and Tails were running along the curve, scouting for chaos emeralds.
"Hey tails how far is the next emerald?" Sonic asked to Tails running aside him.
"Not too far ahead! Just around this corner and into a cave!" Tails replied.
They went the direct path Tails had explained. And He was right! There on the celling was a chaos emerald.
"I'll get it!" Tails said flying up to it.
Tails must have been a little dizzy because he flew up into the celling it self!
"OW!" Tails said falling down.
"Tails... are you ok?" Sonic asked Tails
"I did have some Coffea cake... and more coffea. and some chocolate milk.. nothing other though." Tails said.
"Well stop eating those and drinking. Make you go crazy Little bud!" Sonic said dashing up to the emerald grabbing it.
The emerald collection screen appears
"Sonic got a chaos emerald!"
*Emerald collection sound*
"3 more emeralds to go!"
Sonic and Tails head out only to see Knuckles chasing Eggman with the Master Emerald.
*eggman's theme plays*
"STOP YOU BIG FAT EGG!" Knuckles said.
Sonic dashed to knuckles side and said "I'll handle this. Hes easy as pie to handle!" Sonic took out a ring and jumped into a air forming a ball and homing thoked eggman's egg mobile. And it crashed.
"What i tell ya? eggman doesn't know hes so weak!" Sonic says.
"Or am i SONIC!" Eggman said
As he said that Eggman dissipeared with the Master Emerald!
Chapter1 End

How is it?

heres the theme for it.
(Yes the name was inspired by a S3&K remixed theme on youtube)
NOTE There are two links here.
Youtube repeat for it to automaticly repeat and public youtube.
http://www.youtuberepeat.com/watch/?v=2ZFRqXTq9T0

That was great!

Tails shure likes his junk food...



Also, I made up some fan charecters a while ago(and started a game with them, but only briefly). This is just a suggestion, but could you use them in there?

There's a group of 7 chao who call themselves the Chao Squad. Their names(well, nicknames) are Wheels, Fist, Cloud, Splash, Boost, Blend and Gears(and formaly Flash, the final aponent on chao karate over in SA2B). They are very strong but because of their high-pitched voices nobody takes them seriously until they prove themselves to that person. Outside of their specaltys, they have normal stats(with the exeption of Blend, who has higher stats evreywhere)

Wheels
The leader of the "gang". He is blue, with indgo highlights and 2 whip cream-like spikes comming out of the top of his head, one in front of the other(the other is smaller). He can run allmost as fast as Sonic, but not quite. However, he can reach his max speed pretty much right away(just like any other chao).He can make tornadoes by running in circles. He drives a mortorcycle full of spikes.

Fist
He is Wheel's right wing. He has a long spike going backward starting at his forehead, 3 spikes comming out of the back on his head, spikes on his fists like Knuckles and a drangon-like tail. He is red with dark red hilights(probaly, I made the sprites a while ago). He is crazy strong, he can pick up trees like they were coins, buldings like they were bricks and skyscrapers...well...barely. Him and Cloud are dating. He drives a tank.

Cloud
She is ranked right after Fist, not missing by much. She has a square-like head(sorta) with the hilight on her head going in between her eyes, and a block-thing comming out of the back of her head with 2 small airplane-like wings comming out of the sides. Also, her wings are huge. She can fly almost as fast as Wheels can run, and can pick up the whole gang(with a bit of trouble)(excluding Gears since he's allwas at the base) at once. She and Fist are dating. She drives a fighter jet.

Splash
She can swim...well, I never actually deided on this so lets just say faster than Wheels. I never made her sprite, but the plan was to have a giant fin comming out of the top of her head. She's yellow. She can make hurricanes by swiming in circles. She dirves a cruse ship that makes a river in front of it.

I need to go now, but if you're intrested in them I'll finish this up tomoro.