Morklin and the Thieves-A Wonderland fanfiction

Nobody · Post by **Nobody** » Sun Apr 11, 2010 8:19 pm

I have given up making this playable, and just want to share my epic plot.

- Prolouge: The Letter -

Dear Peegue. My rock collection is missing.
Some friends of yours were seen leaving t-
he museum at the time. This paper is sma-
ll. -Morklin

MyNameIsKooky · Post by **MyNameIsKooky** » Sun Apr 11, 2010 8:20 pm

MISSING ROCK COLLECTION? NOOOOOOOOOOOOO...

Continue on. I want to see what happens.

Nobody · Post by **Nobody** » Sun Apr 11, 2010 8:37 pm

I'm doing this from memory of my plot intention, BTW. I never wrote it down or anything.

- Chapter 1: The Beginning -

Peegue went through his daily morning routine. He exited his bedroom, and checked on his life savings, currently a single coin. "NOTE TO SELF:" Peegue wrote on a sign, "SAVE MORE." Peegue then checked on his pet scritter cage, which was still somehow empty. "NOTE TO SELF:" Peegue wrote on another sign, "BUY PET SCRITTER WITH LIFE SAVINGS." Then Peegue exited through the dining room, and proceeded to check his mailbox.

* * *

Peegue rushed to the museum, always ready to help Morklin. Peegue didn't stop to say hello to Mrs. Flowerpot, like he usually did, but he hoped she would understand. When he got to the museum, he saw that the rock collection room was in ruins. Ladders were turned over, random tables their only supports, and the only things left that could be considered rocks were a few measly jewels. Someone had obviously wanted something.

MyNameIsKooky · Post by **MyNameIsKooky** » Sun Apr 11, 2010 8:39 pm

In Wonderland rocks>jewels?

Nobody · Post by **Nobody** » Sun Apr 11, 2010 8:44 pm

Guess so.

NEW CHAPTER COMING AFTER I GET A NOTEPAD FILE AND WRITE SOME STUFF AHEAD.

MyNameIsKooky · Post by **MyNameIsKooky** » Sun Apr 11, 2010 8:45 pm

That works.

Nobody · Post by **Nobody** » Mon Apr 12, 2010 2:54 am

This is the last chapter of the day. I'll post more tomorrow.

- Chapter 2: Getting Stuff -

Peegue and Morklin were discussing the matter of the missing rocks. "And the problem is," said

Morklin, "Ace, Jedlic, and Gaboonga were seen fleeing at the exact time I found the rock collection

room in ruins. Suspicious, isn't it? I know you trust them, and so do I, but if we want to prove it wasn't

them we have to find the collection. That is why I have given you some stuff. A lucky emerald, it has

given me my luck."

"Sounds useful, considering how safe it's kept your rock collection." Peegue commented.

"A few spare coins," Morklin continued, "and a green key to some lock."

"Well, thanks for the key and the money, I guess," Peegue said. "I only have one coin at home."

So Peegue took his stuff and went outside. "Hello!" he siad to Mrs. Flowerpot.

"Bah!" she exclaimed. "Humbug!" Peegue sighed. Apparently she was upset. Peegue stopped at

LooseScrew's Merchandise, hoping to get a pair of magic gloves.

"Hello!" said LooseScrew. "Whaddya want?"

"I'd like a Spy-Eye please." said Peegue. "I need to look for stuff." Unfortunately, the price of the Spy

-Eye was one coin more than what he had been given.

"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" said LooseScrew. "Da Spy-Eye is mine to CONTROL.

To OVERPOWER. Now bye bye."

After going back to get his life savings, Peegue stopped at LooseScrew's Merchandise again.

"YOU'VE TAKEN EVERYTHING FROM ME!" LooseScrew wailed.

"That's all I want, though, so you have time to restock," Peegue said.

"Aww!" said LooseScrew. "Well come back, Doug.

I KNOW WHO YOU ARE.

TEE HEE."

MyNameIsKooky · Post by **MyNameIsKooky** » Wed Apr 14, 2010 12:14 am

Is it weirdly line-placed to make it page-esque?

Nobody · Post by **Nobody** » Wed Apr 14, 2010 12:32 am

I'm copying MooseJaw's stuff from his dialogs, to the line break if there's multiple lines in the dialogs. Also I copied it from Notepad, so maybe that gave the other stuff a similar effect.

MyNameIsKooky · Post by **MyNameIsKooky** » Wed Apr 14, 2010 12:34 am

It helps to turn word wrap off when copying and pasting.

boywhoflies · Post by **boywhoflies** » Tue Apr 27, 2010 9:02 pm

You are great at that.I l.o.l.ed at the life saveings and scriter joke.

Nobody · Post by **Nobody** » Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:19 am

Thank you for reminding me to post Chapter 3.

- Chapter 3: The Sewers -

As Peegue set out to try the key in some locks, Morklin ran out. "Wait!" said Morklin, "I have this for you. It's one of the few little gemstones not missing. Just a little emerald I keep for luck."

"Thanks," said Peegue, "but you need it more than me. It's not like just because I'm involved this is going to turn out epic or anything."

"Won't it?" Morklin asked. "Take it. You'll somehow need it, I'm sure."

* * *

Peegue had been trying the key in various locks, and he never expected the passage to the sewers to be the right one. He tried it anyway, and to his surprise, it worked. Because he didn't have anywhere better to look (At least, nowhere he had access to), he went in. It got darker as he stepped down the creaky stairs, he could hear the noise of something dripping ahead. As he got closer he could see that a leaky ceiling was creating a puddle on the floor. He walked around the puddle, but was blocked by a large flowing river of water from the town. He could see that the water has a greenish tint. It came from drains on the wall. Peegue searched for a button or a switch, any way to cross, but found none. As he started to turn around, however, a bridge came up next to the drains. He walked across slowly.

Halfway across, Peegue heard a pounding noise. Turning around, he saw a chomper break through the first drain. "Nyak, nyak, nyak, nyak!" The chomper headed towards him at high speed. Peegue ran faster then he had before, feeling like his lungs were going to explode! A pillar fell down, and the end of the bridge collapsed. Peegue looked at the missing part of the bridge, then at the chomper. Finally, he decided to jump. He fell in the water halfway towards the other side of the flowing water. He started sinking, and began to panic.

MyNameIsKooky · Post by **MyNameIsKooky** » Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:36 am

DUN DUN DUN!

I want Chapter 4!

^_^ · Post by **^_^** » Wed Apr 28, 2010 6:08 am

meh too!

LittleZbot · Post by **LittleZbot** » Thu Apr 29, 2010 10:31 pm

MEH TOO!!

tails the fox · Post by **tails the fox** » Thu Apr 29, 2010 11:49 pm

Nobody i can try my best to make a Game version of this if you want but
I need you to tell me where it starts. (i know peege's house)
But where is it?
And if you want to have custom textures in it.
I will get started working on this

Nobody · Post by **Nobody** » Fri Apr 30, 2010 12:42 am

-Chapter 4: Hop, Skip, Jump, and Blink-

Peegue's feet touched the bottom of the body of water. He struggled to get back up. He was running out of air quickly. He saw his hat floating on the surface. He tried to grab it in order to float too, but it was inches out of reach. He knew then there was no hope.

Then he saw the form of another Stinker, and felt miserable. If you have ever experienced anything more embarrassing than being a former mayor caught drowning in green water with your bald spot showing, I pity you. Unfortunate Peegue was in just that situation when the Stinker on the floor above tossed him a life ring. "Hold this for me, I'll be right back." Peegue grabbed the life ring and held on tightly.

Eventually the Stinker came back. Peegue could see that he had a red sewer hat. "Hello!" said the Stinker, "my name is Hop. What's your name?"

"Uh..." Peegue said, "Peegue."

"Oh. Why are you in the sewers?"

"I'm looking for rocks," Peegue answered. "Now would you please pull me-"

"Ooh! A search! I'll go get my friends! Wait here."

By this time the life ring had started to float away, and was starting to head towards a series of floating platforms. Then the narrator spoke up. "Use these gloves to use magic. The purple magic allows you to teleport, even over water! To practice, you must-"

"I thought you promised to stop teaching me stuff," Peegue interrupted.

"Right. Sorry."

So Peegue hopped from platform to platform using Blink. There were other challenges along the way, but nothing so terrifying as the chomper on the bridge. Before long he had made his way to shore. "I hope this is the last of the troubles I'll have to get those stones," Peegue said. As he said it, he walked into what at first glance looked like a Wee Stinker. Then he realized the Stinker had a green sewer hat, instead of a green cap. But that was the only difference he could find.

"Hi! I'm Skip!" said Skip. "I'm here to help you SAVE THE WORLD. So what are we doing? Blasting UFO's? Smashing giant chompers? Swimming to Fire Island?"

"Uh, no," said Peegue, "I'm just looking for rocks."

"Oh," said Skip. "Will they be on the moon? In an evil laboratory? Under our noses? Above our noses? At the bottom of a bottomless pit? In a volcano?"

"I don't think so," said Peegue. "I think they'll be somewhere around here."

But Skip did not give up. "What kind of rocks are they? Talking rocks? Explosive rocks? SHINY rocks? Rocks that want to take over the world? Molten rocks? Rocks that rock?"

"NO!" Peegue was getting a bit fed up. "They are the rocks, from Morklin's ordinary, everyday, normal rock collection."

Yet Skip still had more to ask. "Are we going to be chased by anyone? Ninjas? Nightmares? Nuisances? Napping nannies named notoriously? Doctor Words That Start With N? A cute fluffy bunny?"

"NO!!!" shouted Peegue.

"Are you sure it's not Doctor Words That Start With N?" Skip seemed determined to find something exciting. "No starts with N, did you notice? Now I KNOW it's him. There's never been less doubt."

"Coincidence," Peegue sighed.

"Well," said Skip, "if you're sure, I'll stay here, keeping a lookout for mutant footgear, evil monsters, explosive stuff, and Doctor Words That Start With N."

Just as soon as he could get away, Peegue met another Stinker. His mouth was open wide in horror, and his sewer hat was blue. "H-h-hello." he said nervously. "I'm Jump. These sewers are SCARY. I'm going with you out of the SCARY sewers. As long as it's nowhere SCARY, that is. Bye now, you're scaring me."

So Jump ran away, screaming.

"Those were my friends!" Hop said cheerily.

"Oh," was all Peegue could say.

"Searching for ordinary rocks while not being chased by anyone," Skip could be heard mumbling. "Honestly, this is real life!"

MyNameIsKooky · Post by **MyNameIsKooky** » Fri Apr 30, 2010 12:42 am

Lol, their names are colored.

Nobody · Post by **Nobody** » Fri Apr 30, 2010 12:47 am

You read the entire chapter and the funniest part were that I colored their names?

MyNameIsKooky · Post by **MyNameIsKooky** » Fri Apr 30, 2010 12:47 am

No. I only glanced at it. Reading it now...

LittleZbot · Post by **LittleZbot** » Fri Apr 30, 2010 4:09 am

Skip is SO funny!

Nobody · Post by **Nobody** » Fri Apr 30, 2010 2:51 pm

Yes, I like Skip.

MyNameIsKooky · Post by **MyNameIsKooky** » Fri Apr 30, 2010 6:50 pm

I read it.

Nice!

DEEMAN223344 · Post by **DEEMAN223344** » Fri Apr 30, 2010 11:55 pm

Wefight Reference, Eh?

Nobody · Post by **Nobody** » Sat May 01, 2010 1:32 am

Yes. I have referenced the Dctors and the Mutant Sock in the Skip part.

DEEMAN223344 · Post by **DEEMAN223344** » Sat May 01, 2010 1:50 am

Nobody wrote:Yes. I have referenced the Dctors and the Mutant Sock in the Skip part.

That, the Ninja, Evil Bunny, and the Explosive Toilet.

LittleZbot · Post by **LittleZbot** » Tue May 04, 2010 5:46 am

Next chapter?

^_^ · Post by **^_^** » Mon May 10, 2010 5:47 pm

come on!
everyone who posted on this topic wants next chapter!

Nobody · Post by **Nobody** » Mon May 10, 2010 6:00 pm

Or they have in the past. LZ is the only one now who said so now. This chapter is hard to write, because it will be a replacement for puzzles, so it's plot I didn't count on having to write when making this as a Hub system.

DEEMAN223344 · Post by **DEEMAN223344** » Mon May 10, 2010 11:01 pm

I think Skip must be Doctor Words That Start With N.
Wait, that gives me an EVIL idea for Wefight!

EVIL, EH?
EVIL used MASTER BALL.
MISSINGNO. Was caught!
Bother.
*Shot*