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ab-47 wrote:Can Anyone help in the custom cut scene ?
First: it's lagging in a weird way.
second: When I typed the text, some of the text goes to the next line and it's repeated twice.
third: the custom cutscene is repeating twice, help plz!

I'm waiting here....

Maybe I can help you.
What you need to be in the first cutscene?

jozsefkoma wrote:Maybe I can help you.
What you need to be in the first cutscene?

I already done one. but there three problems.

First: it's lagging in a weird way.
second: When I typed the text, some of the text goes to the next line and it's repeated twice.
third: the custom cutscene is repeating twice, help plz! Sad

if you want I can give you the cutscene, ok?

Can you give me the your wg?

jozsefkoma wrote:Can you give me the your wg?

pmed.
plus 4 everyone. DC isn't coming this month... after all I finished it but still I need to work on it.

BUMP

I hope people won't ignore these posts.

first Post

Full Version ready!
-bugs fixed.
-new stepping stones
-new rainbow spirit model
-new hat (exchanged)
-new areas available.
-deleted (the forest who no one lived) area.
-new custom cutscene
-other
-about 98 stars.
Download


-I never thought I'll make it this this far. It's the first hub That Has been released (full version)

Have fun!

DP

three reasons for hating my hub and considering it as the worst hub.

1:STORY: it's kinda scrambled up! people will hardly understand The story or won't understand at All! The Story was the least what I took care of.

2:CUSTOM CUTSCENE: The Cutscene is kinda stupid. it wasn't supposed to be like that. and the words are still appearing and I just some to appear.

3:ATITTUDE: Sometimes. I think people ignore me because they hate my attitude. that's why I Am ignored in here (ok! hardly being talked to...)

Almost forgot! plz. paste this in the data/adventures/hub.

TP

last thing.

I'd like to thank...

MHD111: he helped with everything. especially in the demo.

Antonio: he helped me in adventure making and wop Making

Loofboy333: He helped me in several adventures.

thank you people.

Oh Yeah and.

music from:
247.ogg from MNIK
248.ogg From MNIK
boss theme from MWM
Chase theme from MWM
Boss music2 From little zbot
the rest are my music.

I am now downloading it. Congratulations on having the first completed hub!

DP.
You left a testing cheat in the beginning.

100th post from this topic.
Now I'm downloading the Full.

Master Wonder Mage wrote:DP.
You left a testing cheat in the beginning.

what!!!!

EDIT: OH Crap! I forgot removing the tokens and the ocean. reuploading...

Congratulations on having the first completed hub!

thanks.

100th post from this topic.
Now I'm downloading the Full.

yep.

aww.

I wanted to see if my hub was the first ever to be completed

Technos72 wrote:aww.

I wanted to see if my hub was the first ever to be completed

and you also started before me. *shot*

I started: 19 jan 2011
I ended: 19 aug 2011

say! less than 8 months I finished Mine! wow!
well..... My Hub is something like an Almost hub. Because it has only 98 stars.
and It's supposed to be more than 100...

wow!!!
THE FULL Version READY
I'm sooooooo happy!
i think it will be good hub
thank you for the great hub!

Well, I beat it with 98 stars, and got past that last star gate. I'm not sure if you really want me to post the "revealed information" here seeing as that would give it away. Should I just PM you? Anyway, critique form.

Storyline (6/10)

Somewhat shaky and confusing (It took me forever to figure out what the Marching orange really was, and such), but was really epic after you enter the Marching orange's base thingy. Also, very few words were capitalized, and there were various other grammatical errors in the dialog making it harder. The storyline would be much clearer if these were not present.

Action Gameplay (9/10)
The action levels were quite fun. I am just very hesitant about giving out tens.

Puzzle Gameplay (8/10)
You made very clever puzzles utilizing many of the elements from WA1. You did not include most of the Retro elements, though.

Boss Battles (10/10)
Although there were not many until the Darkness, those in the Darkness were some of the best I've seen.

Scenery (8/10)
After the first few levels, the scenery got quite good. The only exception is in Stinker Town, where the water which is supposed to be rainbow colored, is lava due to MOFI's texture changes. You should have included another water texture for cases such as these.

Level Organization (8/10)
Not enough optional quests for my taste. It got hard trying to find 41 stars to get through that star gate, when you have only had found 33, for instance.

Bug-free (4/10)
In almost any hub location containing blink, it is possible to get stuck. In one place in The Darkness, it is possible to get trapped in a gate or killed by a spikeyball. There was one place I had to cheat (in an adventure) and one place in the hub, where I had to go back and delete a dialog button, because of empty dialogs popping up. The adventure in The Darkness against the guy with the thwarts had a testing cheat. This is probably what hurt the hub most. Oh, and I almost forgot, you have to edit or *censored* in order to leave the ocean.

Master Wonder Mage wrote:Well, I beat it with 98 stars, and got past that last star gate. I'm not sure if you really want me to post the "revealed information" here seeing as that would give it away. Should I just PM you? Anyway, critique form.
.

either a screenshot (hide the last info. using paint)
or PM the word.

Storyline (6/10)

Somewhat shaky and confusing (It took me forever to figure out what the Marching orange really was, and such), but was really epic after you enter the Marching orange's base thingy. Also, very few words were capitalized, and there were various other grammatical errors in the dialog making it harder. The storyline would be much clearer if these were not present.

That's why I wrote that it won't be the best thing in my hub. When I'll make my next hub (if so) I'll start with the story.

Action Gameplay (9/10)
The action levels were quite fun. I am just very hesitant about giving out tens.

Puzzle Gameplay (8/10)
You made very clever puzzles utilizing many of the elements from WA1. You did not include most of the Retro elements, though.

I've placed them both together because they almost have the same idea.
I didn't put retro elements because I didn't have any Ideas about them.

Boss Battles (10/10)
Although there were not many until the Darkness, those in the Darkness were some of the best I've seen.

That's because there's no other place else to place them except in TMOL and the darkness. I'm Impressed because it's the only mark that is 10/10

Scenery (8/10)
After the first few levels, the scenery got quite good. The only exception is in Stinker Town, where the water which is supposed to be rainbow colored, is lava due to MOFI's texture changes. You should have included another water texture for cases such as these.

Stinker town should have been bigger and better to make the scenery better.

Level Organization (8/10)
Not enough optional quests for my taste. It got hard trying to find 41 stars to get through that star gate, when you have only had found 33, for instance.

I should have worked harder.

Bug-free (4/10)
In almost any hub location containing blink, it is possible to get stuck. In one place in The Darkness, it is possible to get trapped in a gate or killed by a spikeyball. There was one place I had to cheat (in an adventure) and one place in the hub, where I had to go back and delete a dialog button, because of empty dialogs popping up. The adventure in The Darkness against the guy with the thwarts had a testing cheat. This is probably what hurt the hub most. Oh, and I almost forgot, you have to edit or *censored* in order to leave the ocean

ooops! A bug! the spikey mustn't get out.
Which adventure you had to cheat? and..... (stupid testing cheats)
I'm Pretty sure there wasn't any bug in the darkness (hub) where is that place that had a mistake in the dia.
The only part I didn't understand is the ocean part. more explanation plz.



What Made me impressed that you finished DC/MODC within two days , If you want to post the last dialog written. PM It Or gimme a screenshot. (but hide it)
what does it do? extra stuff. For more info about it. PM it and tell you everything.

The adventure I had to cheat was the one where the Marching Orange is getting attacked, the bad guys, Rocky, etc. keep teleporting and fighting you. The glitch is at the part where MO blocks, then an empty dialog comes up, but you don't receive a star. The hub part is right before that when you are getting ready to enter the room with MO and the rainbow spirits. Once you go through the gates and get off the bridge, an empty dialog pops up. On the ocean, when you attempt to exit back to the Kaboom village, you land on the command 7 button that takes you to the ocean. There is no way to escape without editing it or something.

all fixed!
I'll release in a week's time DC's fixed version.
but first. and at least. take the changes.
and place them in data/adventures folder.

Edit the first post, it quicker for other users.

DOWNLOADING!!! YAY

ab-47 wrote: Boss music2 From little zbot

ME MUSIC? GOTTA PLAY

LittleZbot wrote:

ab-47 wrote: Boss music2 From little zbot

ME MUSIC? GOTTA PLAY

satisfied!
no offence... the music is the last boss....

hi ab-47!
can you help me???
my bag is full!!!
what i can do with the tokens?
and the keys?
how i can finish this adventure without a bag!!!
look:

ab-47 wrote:

LittleZbot wrote:

ab-47 wrote: Boss music2 From little zbot

ME MUSIC? GOTTA PLAY

satisfied!
no offence... the music is the last boss....

MAKES ME EAGER TO GET TO DA BOSS!

kidkidaaa1 wrote:hi ab-47!
can you help me???
my bag is full!!!
what i can do with the tokens?
and the keys?
how i can finish this adventure without a bag!!!
look:

that's NG. abort the level and go to the underground. and open the white gate on your right. I hope you have a lamp.

Edit: you have!

Edit2: if you find tokens... don't take them... until you have a large inventory bag.

in the first dark adventure in castle underground, if you abort, you start again
and the dark adventures are so tough and kinda buggy

Qwerty20000 wrote:in the first dark adventure in castle underground, if you abort, you start again
and the dark adventures are so tough and kinda buggy

Ooops! A mistake.

They aren't buggy They are really hard. (action levels)

ab-47 wrote:

kidkidaaa1 wrote:hi ab-47!
can you help me???
my bag is full!!!
what i can do with the tokens?
and the keys?
how i can finish this adventure without a bag!!!
look:

that's NG. abort the level and go to the underground. and open the white gate on your right. I hope you have a lamp.

Edit: you have!

Edit2: if you find tokens... don't take them... until you have a large inventory bag.

thank you ab-47!
i cannot see the white gate on the the right in the dark!

kidkidaaa1 wrote:

ab-47 wrote:

kidkidaaa1 wrote:hi ab-47!
can you help me???
my bag is full!!!
what i can do with the tokens?
and the keys?
how i can finish this adventure without a bag!!!
look:

that's NG. abort the level and go to the underground. and open the white gate on your right. I hope you have a lamp.

Edit: you have!

Edit2: if you find tokens... don't take them... until you have a large inventory bag.

thank you ab-47!


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i cannot see the white gate on the the right in the dark!