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I've created another level in which you must find a pair of "normal" gloves in a cave. It shouldn't be too hard. Also, this one has a story!

Hi Nuclear; you adventure was pretty good! I liked some of the clever things you included, like how you placed the chargers. A tip for the future: in cave environments, try using jagged walls. It looks more organic.

StinkerSquad01 wrote:Hi Nuclear; you adventure was pretty good! I liked some of the clever things you included, like how you placed the chargers. A tip for the future: in cave environments, try using jagged walls. It looks more organic.

Thanks for your review, StinkerSquad01!

Hi, nice adventure!

There was a grammar and a spelling error in the dialogue. Also, I recommend making the stinker walk faster so you don't have to wait. Also, don't use rainbow magic to prevent people from using magic in an area. I recommend finding another method. If you're gonna go that, then at least use white magic instead (magic colour 7, often referred to as "Nul" magic).

Your storyline was good, although I would have liked for it to be longer. Perhaps you could make a sequel to it. ~ 6/10

md wrote:Also, don't use rainbow magic to prevent people from using magic in an area. I recommend finding another method. If you're gonna go that, then at least use white magic instead (magic colour 7, often referred to as "Nul" magic).

Why?

md wrote:Hi, nice adventure!

There was a grammar and a spelling error in the dialogue. Also, I recommend making the stinker walk faster so you don't have to wait. Also, don't use rainbow magic to prevent people from using magic in an area. I recommend finding another method. If you're gonna go that, then at least use white magic instead (magic colour 7, often referred to as "Nul" magic).

Your storyline was good, although I would have liked for it to be longer. Perhaps you could make a sequel to it. ~ 6/10

Yeah, I noticed the grammar and spelling errors too. Also, I don't know how to get Null magic, and I didn't want people blinking through the Chomper part. Anyways, I'm planning on making another level that continues this storyline called Escape from the Void. Thanks for your review!

Wait, wasn't Escape from the Void made by Emerald a long time ago?

Wonderman109 wrote:Wait, wasn't Escape from the Void made by Emerald a long time ago?

I believe the adventure your thinking of is Chompers of the Void.

Super Nuclear Power wrote:

md wrote:Hi, nice adventure!

There was a grammar and a spelling error in the dialogue. Also, I recommend making the stinker walk faster so you don't have to wait. Also, don't use rainbow magic to prevent people from using magic in an area. I recommend finding another method. If you're gonna go that, then at least use white magic instead (magic colour 7, often referred to as "Nul" magic).

Your storyline was good, although I would have liked for it to be longer. Perhaps you could make a sequel to it. ~ 6/10

Yeah, I noticed the grammar and spelling errors too. Also, I don't know how to get Null magic, and I didn't want people blinking through the Chomper part. Anyways, I'm planning on making another level that continues this storyline called Escape from the Void. Thanks for your review!

People can still blink through the chomper area. I thought you didn't want people to Brr through it.

StinkerSquad01 wrote:

md wrote:Also, don't use rainbow magic to prevent people from using magic in an area. I recommend finding another method. If you're gonna go that, then at least use white magic instead (magic colour 7, often referred to as "Nul" magic).

Why?

In my opinion, it just doesn't seem very natural.