The Retarded Adventures of Kiyoshi

Technos72 · Post by **Technos72** » Thu Apr 07, 2011 11:29 pm

Thank you for bringing back the edit button!

The Retarded Adventures of Kiyoshi was renamed from WeCross

I like doing crossovers of many popular things. So this is why I'm doing this.

WeCross is a thing similar to Wefight. But this time instead of making it all about random stuff, WeCross focuses mostly on crossovers. Also this isn't a game. This is an endless story which I'm drawing by comics on notebooks. Maybe if this gets known for a while, I was thinking of making a video game out of this just like wefight TVG.

So this whole thing is drawn on notebook, so I can't really upload these pages in full detail since I don't have a scanner. My dad says he'll buy a new printer and scanner if possible so that I can do this. In the meantime I'll be uploading in less detail with my DSi and sd card and take pictures of the pages.

There will be some scenes of WeCross where it can be lolzy and cool looking. So if you guys think this is a good idea, I'll upload the first pages right away.

boywhoflies · Post by **boywhoflies** » Thu Apr 07, 2011 11:34 pm

I think it's a great idea!

LittleZbot · Post by **LittleZbot** » Thu Apr 07, 2011 11:36 pm

It sound good, but WEFIGHT IS NOT RANDOM STUFF! *shot by Deeman who is somehow viewing this*

boywhoflies · Post by **boywhoflies** » Thu Apr 07, 2011 11:37 pm

He can view, but he can't post.
Until you venture into the far off land of my forums.

Technos72 · Post by **Technos72** » Fri Apr 08, 2011 11:02 pm

The main crossovers of stuff I'm focusing most on are listed below

- My anime
- Yume Nikki
- Star Wars
- My little pony friendship is magic

Some of them will appear in further plots after this first one. I was thinking of uploading the first few pages of the first plot via DSi and SD card right now. Who wants to see them?

boywhoflies · Post by **boywhoflies** » Fri Apr 08, 2011 11:20 pm

I do!

LittleZbot · Post by **LittleZbot** » Sat Apr 09, 2011 12:26 am

Nobody · Post by **Nobody** » Sat Apr 09, 2011 12:27 am

Technos72 wrote:WeCross is a thing similar to Wefight. [...] WeCross focuses mostly on crossovers. Also this isn't a game. This is an endless story which I'm drawing by comics on notebooks.

That doesn't sound much like wefight, more like something totally different. I don't mean to say that it's bad, though.

Technos72 · Post by **Technos72** » Sat Apr 09, 2011 1:47 am

here are pages 1-3. Most words are not legible so I'll tell you what people are saying. Numbers represent panels. This thing will get out of the way when I get a scanner

Page 1
Yo, these are MY stories with MY friends and many other friends which I don't say "MY" to. along with the rest of the content.

Page 2
1 - dude use the chopper!
2 - "get to the choppa" (hes playing modern warfare 2)
3 - damn I lost this game
4 - wow it's 12:00 AM already?
5 - i guess that means today is december 21st. Closer to 2012 ending
6 - -listed on the 21 square on calender says "doomsday"-
7 - I GUESS THAT MEANS TODAY IS DECEMBER THE 21ST
8 - meh what am i thinking? the damn thing is fake and... and... (low energy, sleepy)
9 - sleeping
10 - 8:49 AM
11 - -energizer bunny walks in-
12 - GAH TURN THAT DOWN!
13 - he's not listening
14 - -energy full- hmm i feel wierd. as if i was filled with energy. Guess I might as well go out
15 - outside: hmm

page 3
1 - kiyoshi: yeah looks like doomsday is all fake
2 - yumi: hi kiyoshi. kiyoshi: h hey yumi
3 - kiyoshi: i think i have confirmed that the whole 2012 thing is all fake
4 - yumi: oh that 2012 --
5 - yumi: oh my god what is that!? kiyoshi: what
6 - -meteor is about to hit kiyoshi's house-
7 - kiyoshi: OH S***
8 - -superman flies around- random dude: hey whats that in the air?
9 - random dude 2: it's a bird! random dude 3: it's a plane!
10 - kiyoshi: don't you get it? this dude is too big for a plane and too small for a plane. it's freakin superman!
11 - superman pushes meteor
12 - kiyoshi: hey he's pushing the meteor out of the way!! yumi: wait. he's throwing it?
13 - kiyoshi: yeah he is. I'll check where he's throwing it.
14 - -zoom 50%- kiyoshi: wait a second...
15 - kiyoshi: DINKLEBERG...

boywhoflies · Post by **boywhoflies** » Sat Apr 09, 2011 2:21 pm

Looks great!

LittleZbot · Post by **LittleZbot** » Sat Apr 09, 2011 9:20 pm

GOOD DRAWING SKILLS!

Technos72 · Post by **Technos72** » Tue Apr 12, 2011 8:56 pm

I'm planning WeCross so that it suits best with both the comic and the video game. I also want you to know that I may be getting a new scanner this weekend so that I can upload pages at maximum quality. For now the total pages I've done so far

Total pages - 2.4

Technos72 · Post by **Technos72** » Sat Apr 16, 2011 8:10 pm

I just got my new scanner, printer, and photocopier. It's also wireless so that I can use my laptop to print and upload to and from it. Once this bad boy is set up I'll upload the pages so far to better detail plus page 4 since I'm done with that.

Technos72 · Post by **Technos72** » Sun Apr 17, 2011 1:10 pm

TP

here are pages 1-3 in better quality. The bottom of the last one had bad lighting which sucks

boywhoflies · Post by **boywhoflies** » Sun Apr 17, 2011 3:54 pm

Lol, the energizer rabbit...

That too big for a bird...joke was funny too.

And the fact that the meteor went straight for Kiyoshi's house was rofl. Did I spell his name right?

Was superman throwing the asteroid at Dinkelburg, or was Dinkelburg Superman? I think that's the only part I didn't quite get...probaly because that was at the end of what you drew.

Also, Dinkelburg is from Fairly Odd Parents, right?

Technos72 · Post by **Technos72** » Sun Apr 17, 2011 4:15 pm

yes. Based on the 4th page which I'll upload later, Superman takes the meteor over to Dinkleberg's house. And yes it's from fairly odd parents. I discovered it was a popular phrase from Know Your Meme

jozsefkoma · Post by **jozsefkoma** » Sun Apr 17, 2011 4:58 pm

LittleZbot wrote:GOOD DRAWING SKILLS!

Agree that 100%

Technos72 · Post by **Technos72** » Sun Apr 17, 2011 8:28 pm

I'm about to make information for WeCross the game. But I don't know what to do

a - make a new topic for it but the topic is similar to this one
b - put the game information on this topic but will mix up with the comics

which is the best way?

boywhoflies · Post by **boywhoflies** » Sun Apr 17, 2011 10:10 pm

Technos72 · Post by **Technos72** » Mon Apr 18, 2011 8:05 pm

Finished pages four and five. I'll just wait until the new scanner is accessable before I can upload them. After page 4 I start making crossovers of two really popular people.

Technos72 · Post by **Technos72** » Tue Nov 01, 2011 12:31 am

This comic has been renamed to "Retarded Adventures of Kiyoshi" Can a mod rename the topic name to that please?

Juring my non-laptop times I was working good on this and now created almost 100 pages of my 180-page book. There are my own anime characters plus 5 new characters of my creations appearing in my comic. The many crossovers include

- Ponies
- Meme faces
- Lucky Star
- Gandalf
- Billy Mays
- Repo Games (a game show)
- The Ring
- Scream

I'm working on the halloween special right now. I cant really post everything while having my dad bothering me the whole time, maybe later in my new better website.

Technos72 · Post by **Technos72** » Thu Dec 08, 2011 1:16 am

TP

I'm making a new website, and I'll be putting in the pages of this comic on. I've made about 130 pages so far which is almost three quarters done the comic. When I set my new website up, I'll be posting 10 pages a week for more than 13 weeks, that would be somewhere in february 2012 I'll stop posting 10 a week. Assuming I don't make a whole load of pages and then move on to Book 2.

I'll probably post some previews tonight or tomorrow along with the new characters in my anime creations topic.

Technos72 · Post by **Technos72** » Thu Dec 08, 2011 2:00 am

Here are five preview pages you'll be seeing in the future

I'll show new characters in this comic tomorrow

Technos72 · Post by **Technos72** » Sat Jan 14, 2012 9:24 pm

Quintuple post D:

I'll post the whole comic through file hosting instead of website once I complete it. Right now I have 20 pages left. While in progress. I'll share some random pages at random times.

But the way this topic is going I may not...

StinkerSquad01 · Post by **StinkerSquad01** » Sat Jan 14, 2012 9:48 pm

I really like these, they're just a bit hard to see.

Technos72 · Post by **Technos72** » Wed Feb 01, 2012 4:04 am

Done the 180 pages of Book one! Now I'm going to polish it by fixing any loose areas, make the front and back cover, and then start to upload the pages. This comic will be somewhat gendre netural (whatever its spelled)

The list of my characters in the comic
- Kiyoshi
- Yumi
- Shuya
- Nuriho
- Izumi
- Miki
- Kimi
- Shijo
- Ryou
- Shiyoki

EDIT: I'll give you the whole list of crossovers

- Modern Warfare 2
- Energizer Bunny
- Superman
- Dinkleberg
- Hitler
- Bed Intruder
- The Ring
- Angry Birds
- Eh Marine punch
- Meme faces
- The inigo montoya phrase from Princess Bride
- Billy mays
- Vince Offer
- the word "fatality"
- MY LITTLE PONY FRIENDSHIP IS MAGIC
- Stephen Hawking
- Powerpuff girls
- Fosters Home for imaginary friends
- Milky way and the galaxy girls (I somehow like it )
- Duck Hunt
- Lucky Star
- Its a trap
- Harry Potter and the goblet of fire
- G I Joe
- Repo Games
- The Noob Wheel from Life and Level
- Scream
- Hatsune Miku
- Portal 2 co-op trailer
- Inception
- Opening chest in Ocarina of Time
- Friday
- Mario Bros
- Dian Shi Ma Li Mario Lottery
- A Cristmas Carol
- N64 kid
- Pandora's Box
- Another random series of characters I did, which I'll use in a game in the future
- The Great War
- Minecraft
- Spiez Sappin ma sentrehs (I wanted to do that)
- Wikipedia
- SOPA

Technos72 · Post by **Technos72** » Sun Mar 11, 2012 2:16 am

how about this: Each day I'll try to upload 10 pages for eighteen days. I'll be scanning the first 10 plus the front and back cover right now.

StinkerSquad01 · Post by **StinkerSquad01** » Sun Mar 11, 2012 3:14 am

Technos72 wrote:how about this: Each day I'll try to upload 10 pages for eighteen days. I'll be scanning the first 10 plus the front and back cover right now.

I like that idea!

Technos72 · Post by **Technos72** » Sun Mar 11, 2012 3:20 am

Oh christ. I messed up on the pages and I have little time left today. D:

Tomorrow I'll start posting 10 pages a day.

I'm also putting them into a mediafire .zip and will update it daily

Technos72 · Post by **Technos72** » Mon Mar 12, 2012 12:37 am

This is just so sad. My printer is suddenly not working and I can't scan.

WHY CAN'T I JUST POST THIS COMIC UP????

The Retarded Adventures of Kiyoshi

The Retarded Adventures of Kiyoshi

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