#02 - Mr. Sir's Dictionary of DOOM

StinkerSquad01 · Post by **StinkerSquad01** » Tue Jun 19, 2012 2:39 am

Mr. Sir managed to get himself trapped in his dictionary, and forces you into Dictionary Land to save him. I guess you'll have to oblige.

llarson · Post by **llarson** » Tue Jun 19, 2012 2:41 am

I've been waiting for this

.Anyways first download.

llarson · Post by **llarson** » Tue Jun 19, 2012 3:59 am

finished it I'll use this critique sheet sometimes Red=simple yellow=awsome
green=EXCELLENT
MY CRITIQUE SHEET
Puzzles32/50
Deadly cuboid maze:3/10It was alright but not too challenging like most custom adventures
Brr maze:6/10it was alright but a little long
chomper+hay maze:8/10a little easy but very heart pounding
spikeyballs+dragonturtles:6/10a little challenging but alright
fireflower maze:9/10I got past it on the first try but it was a little challenging.It's the type of thing that's hard sometimes
scritter puzzle:2/10I thoght it was a little easy.It was great however 'cause I'm TERRIBLE when it comes to scritter puzzles
SCENERY23/50
hub:10/10I liked how you put stuff to resemble where your going
jail:5/10I liked how it looked small I like small rooms.
Puzzle room:4/10 this rooms scenery was a little boring except for the hayfield and fireflower area.
water room:3/10 sorry but it was a little boring yet I liked how I can go down a river.
First room:1/10 I liked the rainbow teleporter
STORYLINE60/150
Humor:20/50 A dictionary that eats you?What the HECK!lol I liked how it was entire land inside it.

epicness20/50 Mr.sirs rainbow teleporter and deluxe signs were very amazing
character development40/50 I think Mr.sirs haracter was developed pretty much
TOTAL:135/250

your over halfway I think.15+15 = 30 so 135+135 might = 300
I just did the math and it's 270.I liked your adventure however.I was still very fun.Sorry if that offended you in any way.Anyways I enjoyed it.

StinkerSquad01 · Post by **StinkerSquad01** » Tue Jun 19, 2012 4:08 am

I'm sorry, but that post contradicts itself so much that I have no idea how to understand it.

MyNameIsKooky · Post by **MyNameIsKooky** » Tue Jun 19, 2012 4:12 am

llarson wrote:finished it I'll use this critique sheet sometimes
BLAH BLAH RATINGS
TOTAL:135/250

your over halfway I think.15+15 = 30 so 135+135 might = 300
I just did the math and it's 270 etc etc etc

10/10: Your post absolutely horrifies me.

llarson · Post by **llarson** » Tue Jun 19, 2012 4:28 am

MyNameIsKooky wrote:
llarson wrote:finished it I'll use this critique sheet sometimes
BLAH BLAH RATINGS
TOTAL:135/250

your over halfway I think.15+15 = 30 so 135+135 might = 300
I just did the math and it's 270 etc etc etc
10/10: Your post absolutely horrifies me.

lol

sorry I added 20 to the rating so I forgot to change it.

I'm sorry, but that post contradicts itself so much that I have no idea how to understand it.

The last post is supposed to say that I liked the level as a whole.The ratings tell you how I felt about each part.

I'm bad at being a critic so it's nothing personal.I was actually having trouble critiquing as for mynameiskookys post I felt

EDIT:Actually mynameiskookys post made me feel very uncomfortable

Master Wonder Mage · Post by **Master Wonder Mage** » Tue Jun 19, 2012 4:45 am

That was incredibly confusing, I must say. Giving something a 1/10 and then saying what you liked? Saying that something was too easy and then saying that it's a good thing that it was that easy? And it should be 137, not 135. My advice on critiquing: Give almost nothing a 10/10 unless it was mind-blowingly awesome. If you give something a bad rating, say what made it bad, not what was good about it. And only give something a very bad rating if you feel it really deserves it. Avoid color-coding. It only makes everything harder to read. It's fairly easy to tell what's a good rating and what's bad. And you might want to weight story less, and just have one general section for story. The humor section doesn't apply to all adventures. For instance, TW7 had almost no humor in it. You might find absolutely love the adventure, but have to give it a rating in the C level because of the humor section. And try to avoid giving a rating about half way down the scale. It generally means you didn't like it, and if you didn't you should probably just not give a rating.

I'm not used to making that long of a post. Normally it's just Emerald who does that.

llarson · Post by **llarson** » Tue Jun 19, 2012 4:53 am

Master Wonder Mage wrote:That was incredibly confusing, I must say. Giving something a 1/10 and then saying what you liked? Saying that something was too easy and then saying that it's a good thing that it was that easy? And it should be 137, not 135. My advice on critiquing: Give almost nothing a 10/10 unless it was mind-blowingly awesome. If you give something a bad rating, say what made it bad, not what was good about it. And only give something a very bad rating if you feel it really deserves it. Avoid color-coding. It only makes everything harder to read. It's fairly easy to tell what's a good rating and what's bad. And you might want to weight story less, and just have one general section for story. The humor section doesn't apply to all adventures. For instance, TW7 had almost no humor in it. You might find absolutely love the adventure, but have to give it a rating in the C level because of the humor section. And try to avoid giving a rating about half way down the scale. It generally means you didn't like it, and if you didn't you should probably just not give a rating.

I'm not used to making that long of a post. Normally it's just Emerald who does that.

Thank you for the advice.lol it's right.Well anyways thank you.

Sammy_P · Post by **Sammy_P** » Tue Jun 19, 2012 4:56 am

STORY (20/20)
I find randomness a good addition to a story. This adventure's story was pretty random alright!

SCENERY (20/20)
Scenery was great in the hub!

GAMEPLAY (19/20)
Botanical Zone
Chomper Room: Easy peasy!
Turtle/Spikeyball Room: Little hard.
Scritter Room: Easy.
Fireflower Room: Easy as well.
Doomy Block Place
This was insanely easy!
Excess Water Storage
Took me a while but finally got it.

GLITCH-FREE (20/20)
No glitches!

OVERALL (99/100)
A+ for a well-done adventure! Quick (if 20 minutes counts as quick) and easy!

MyNameIsKooky · Post by **MyNameIsKooky** » Tue Jun 19, 2012 4:59 am

Finished! This one was nice and easy!

I liked the fast water currents, too. No one really uses those much, but they can actually really liven a place up!

llarson wrote:EDIT:Actually mynameiskookys post made me feel very uncomfortable

Oh, you.

llarson · Post by **llarson** » Tue Jun 19, 2012 5:32 am

Oh, you

I'm still a little new so I'm also a little sesitive to what anybody says.

StinkerSquad01 · Post by **StinkerSquad01** » Tue Jun 19, 2012 7:49 am

I think it's good to have some easy adventures now and then to keep balance between the difficult and the simple, and it is good to have some relaxation from the tougher adventures out there.

ab-47 · Post by **ab-47** » Tue Jun 19, 2012 8:16 am

Well this level was easy, but I liked it, It reminds me of the temple of trouble level that I made, Cool!

yot yot5 · Post by **yot yot5** » Tue Jun 19, 2012 12:41 pm

V. Good, but a bit easy. It also gave me a very "Seen that before" feeling.