My Wonderful Graphic Novels

Technos72 · Post by **Technos72** » Mon Mar 04, 2013 3:40 am

"Ben's Game" progress for next update (the BEN comic)
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I have a series of random blank composition books that I plan to draw up comics on for time off excessive laptop stuff. If you were here last year or year before, I finished a comic of Retarded Adventures of Kiyoshi. But now, as I looked into the pages of poor work, I trashed it for the following reasons

- The main characters don't have much unique personalities, except Miki the crazy girl
- I'm using parodies/third-party stuff badly that they have almost nothing to do with the scene
- The character design was made with an anime generator which doesn't show much creativity, unlike my new looks.
- I made several bad jokes throughout the comic

But this time, I'm going to make a better approach with storytelling and make it like how a nice, comedy comic should be. On top of that, after drawing up the whole comic, I'll make a colored, good copy of all 150+ pages. As I make the comics, I'll post the pages in a .zip after making ten pages in a comic project. The same rule goes with good copies. Every ten pages makes an updated .zip with more pages.

Anyway I'm just gonna announce my four projects which I'll do eventually

New Retarded Adventures of Kiyoshi
This version will be alot better. Characters will have many different personalities. There will also be a special setting where, instead of a random stupid place in Japan, a half-modern, half-fantasy world.

Rock the Block
For some reason I wanted to do more things with Rock, my Illegitimate RPG character from Epigam Forums. So here it is. The story takes place in a world where everything is polygonal. Rock goes on random journeys with his friends. These include Scone the cone, Trip the tetrahedron, and Doll the Ball, his girlfriend who he's trying to impress.

Idiotic Minecraft Game
A whack Minecraft comic where Steve goes nuts in his randomly generated world. The comic goes through all the achievements in the game and ends after slaying the Ender Dragon. The table of contents appear as the achievements map.

BEN DROWNED - The Graphic Novel
This Majora's Mask creepypasta is the one I'm most familiar with. I really like this creepypasta. The comic is going to be based on Jadusable's story about a spirit named Ben who haunts a Majora's Mask cartridge as Link's elegy. I chose to do this because when I'm reading something I prefer ones with visuals rather than all-text.

Tomorrow I'm going to start the BEN DROWNED comic

Muzozavr · Post by **Muzozavr** » Mon Mar 04, 2013 11:57 am

BEN DROWNED

Just the first arc (ends with thetruth.rtf) or everything?

Seriously, if you could somehow decipher and explain the Ryukaki arc, that'd be awesome. The atmosphere was great, but I didn't understand anything. (Also, everyone is STILL waiting for the Hubris arc to come out)

Technos72 · Post by **Technos72** » Sun Mar 10, 2013 6:52 pm

Meh. I couldn't really understand this arc thing, so I'll just do the story all the way until Alex/Jadusable destroys the cartridge and his laptop

In other words, I'm making plans for the new Retarded Adventures of Kiyoshi. I'll do a map of the world the story takes place. There will be nine different "kingdoms" each with one of my main characters in it who is going to be the curator of that kingdom.

RAOK will also feature nine Skylanders-like elements in the world. They are Generic, Enchant, Nature, Ice, Fire, Mech, Air, Death, and Love.

The kingdom names are as follows: Nishi City, Utada Country, Hideaki Forest, Soriyu Drifts, Toshie Island, Namika Park, Matsuki Skylands, Shiroi Swamplands, Hirose Gardens.

Technos72 · Post by **Technos72** » Mon Mar 11, 2013 4:03 am

THIS COMIC THING IS GOING TO BE MOVED TO EPIGAM WHERE ITS NEW EPICOM FORUM IS