Fifty-Fourth Adventure: The Golden Toothbrush: Part 7
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Fifty-Fourth Adventure: The Golden Toothbrush: Part 7
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Re: Fifty-Fourth Adventure: The Golden Toothbrush: Part 7
Finished! I'm loving where things are going.
Good thing there's several ways to solve it, then!Emerald141 wrote:I was trying to make an adventure that required forethought, and I think that I went a little overboard. If you can solve the button puzzle by yourself, you are awesome.
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Re: Fifty-Fourth Adventure: The Golden Toothbrush: Part 7
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I finally got round the finishing this.
STORYLINE: 15/20
I like the randomness of this adventure, but I would REALLY like something big to happen. The Mysterious Duck keeps its randomness along with a gripping storyline, but The Golden Toothbrush still seems a bit empty.
SCENERY: 15/20
Nothing special, nothing bad.
PUZZLES: 16/20
Gem/spikey puzzle 2/4: These are becoming very old, but the triple-spikeyball idea was a nice add-on.
Spring puzzle 4/4: Great fun!!!
Button puzzle 3/4: Too hard. Or maybe I'm just stupid.
Transporter puzzle 3/4: Good, but I had 2 brr charges left.
Ice puzzle 4/4: An amazing twist on regular ice puzzles! It was puzzling without being annoying.
ACTION: N/A
GLITCH-FREE: 20/20
I couldn't find any glitches or problems here.
OVERALL: 66/80, or about 84/100.
Fun adventure! Try to make the storyline start grabbing people's attention.
STORYLINE: 15/20
I like the randomness of this adventure, but I would REALLY like something big to happen. The Mysterious Duck keeps its randomness along with a gripping storyline, but The Golden Toothbrush still seems a bit empty.
SCENERY: 15/20
Nothing special, nothing bad.
PUZZLES: 16/20
Gem/spikey puzzle 2/4: These are becoming very old, but the triple-spikeyball idea was a nice add-on.
Spring puzzle 4/4: Great fun!!!
Button puzzle 3/4: Too hard. Or maybe I'm just stupid.
Transporter puzzle 3/4: Good, but I had 2 brr charges left.
Ice puzzle 4/4: An amazing twist on regular ice puzzles! It was puzzling without being annoying.
ACTION: N/A
GLITCH-FREE: 20/20
I couldn't find any glitches or problems here.
OVERALL: 66/80, or about 84/100.
Fun adventure! Try to make the storyline start grabbing people's attention.
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Yes sir, Mr. Mod.Emerald141 wrote:I might be the only one who thinks so, but IMO we really ought to just drop the whole grading sheet thing. They sort of make the flaws in the adventure stand out, and something that's excellent gets treated no different than something which just doesn't have any major problems.