Fifty-Fourth Adventure: The Golden Toothbrush: Part 7

yot yot5 · Post by **yot yot5** » Sun Oct 28, 2012 7:36 pm

WWWWAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!111111111

Nobody · Post by **Nobody** » Mon Oct 29, 2012 4:14 am

Twist ending.

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Mon Oct 29, 2012 12:29 pm

Working on this...just wondering,

(Possible Spoiler)

Spoiler wrote: how do you fit a thwart in a chair costume in the first place?

dig 222 · Post by **dig 222** » Mon Oct 29, 2012 12:46 pm

Wonderman109 wrote:Working on this...just wondering,

(Possible Spoiler)

Spoiler wrote: how do you fit a thwart in a chair costume in the first place?

You flatten it into a small thwart, then genetically engineer it to have 2 extra legs.

Nobody · Post by **Nobody** » Mon Oct 29, 2012 3:52 pm

Then remove one? ew

Emerald141 · Post by **Emerald141** » Mon Oct 29, 2012 7:41 pm

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Mon Oct 29, 2012 8:30 pm

I'm conveniently stuck on the button puzzle.

MyNameIsKooky · Post by **MyNameIsKooky** » Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:22 pm

Finished! I'm loving where things are going.

Emerald141 wrote:I was trying to make an adventure that required forethought, and I think that I went a little overboard. If you can solve the button puzzle by yourself, you are awesome.

Good thing there's several ways to solve it, then!

Emerald141 · Post by **Emerald141** » Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:37 pm

Wonderman109 · Post by **Wonderman109** » Fri Nov 02, 2012 8:45 pm

Still stuck on the button puzzle...

Emerald141 · Post by **Emerald141** » Sat Nov 03, 2012 1:07 pm

yot yot5 · Post by **yot yot5** » Mon Nov 12, 2012 3:06 pm

I finally got round the finishing this.

STORYLINE: 15/20
I like the randomness of this adventure, but I would REALLY like something big to happen. The Mysterious Duck keeps its randomness along with a gripping storyline, but The Golden Toothbrush still seems a bit empty.

SCENERY: 15/20
Nothing special, nothing bad.

PUZZLES: 16/20
Gem/spikey puzzle 2/4: These are becoming very old, but the triple-spikeyball idea was a nice add-on.
Spring puzzle 4/4: Great fun!!!
Button puzzle 3/4: Too hard. Or maybe I'm just stupid.

Transporter puzzle 3/4: Good, but I had 2 brr charges left.
Ice puzzle 4/4: An amazing twist on regular ice puzzles! It was puzzling without being annoying.

ACTION: N/A

GLITCH-FREE: 20/20
I couldn't find any glitches or problems here.

OVERALL: 66/80, or about 84/100.
Fun adventure! Try to make the storyline start grabbing people's attention.

Emerald141 · Post by **Emerald141** » Mon Nov 12, 2012 3:24 pm

yot yot5 · Post by **yot yot5** » Mon Nov 12, 2012 3:27 pm

Emerald141 wrote:I might be the only one who thinks so, but IMO we really ought to just drop the whole grading sheet thing. They sort of make the flaws in the adventure stand out, and something that's excellent gets treated no different than something which just doesn't have any major problems.

Yes sir, Mr. Mod.

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